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bernie moore

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    ON THE ROCKS

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    Jed, you find the darndest things in Brooklyn:) I see a clash between an aging, rotting boat and the vibrancy with which you have presented it. Perhaps a more muted saturation would have served better. Regards, Bernie

    a gap

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    Shane, very arresting. The contrast of the darker mood against the sky is very effective. I wonder if you could bring up any detail in the rocks without losing any of the mood? Also have you explored this as a vertical format focusing more on the gap with the sides as borders? Nice work in any format, though. Regards, Bernie
  1. Rick, what you have here is two pics, each quite good in its own rights, but I'm not sure I like them juxtaposed. If you felt you had to add something to the pic then perhaps you could deal with the pic itself, maybe punching up the contrast or saturation. Consider various crops as well. Regards, Bernie

    The bucket

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    Andrej, what caused the color drop off on the bottom and left? Nice composition, though I might move the bucket to the left enough to crop out the column, and pick up the flowers on the bottom left. Regards, Bernie
  2. Milena, When you post a pic this long I can't view the entire image. Thus I have to look at it in pieces (scroll) and assemble it in my mind, and never get the effect of the pic as a whole. That said It seems a very nice shot; I like the tranquility it invokes. Regards, Bernie

    Glimmer of Hope

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    Dave, I see me in the photo and in Rita's words. Yet by mid day I'm as good as new. It's an interesting composition, compelling to the eye and the subliminal suggestions it garners. Regards, Bernie

    Untitled

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    John, might I suggest using a crop of the pic where you capitalize more on the reflection against the image. There is something very peaceful here that could be highlighted, Regards, Bernie

    Amazement

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    Farago, could you tell us a little about why this is close to you? Is it one pic or two spliced together. As is, I'm at a bit of a loss to react. Regards, Bernie
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