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Hi there Gary! I see you are relatively new to photo.net. Welcome! I looked at your portfolio. You are my kind of photographer.... hobbyist who shoots from the hip, right?

This picture is ok. Not as good as some of your other portraits you have listed. For me there is too much going on here especially in the background. Your DOF is good.... but the angle (composition) of your subject is off for me... the stripes of her shirt, the lines of the DVDs, the lines of the door/cabinet behind her head... the opposite way she leans. Too busy. Can you see what I mean?

Her expression is priceless however :)