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miles_hecker

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  1. A good solid photo, but not exceptional.

    A warming polarizer would have helped pop both the colors and the reflection. Also Velvia is a tough film to shoot in 35mm. The grain shows up on scans in the sky. While Velvia is good for producing impressive slides on the light table, Provia 100F scans much better. You can adjust the saturation and contrast after the scan to taste if you like.

    Big Ben

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    Although this is somewhat of a cliche shot,

    it's well done. Good composition, color and tonal values. I don't understand the many average ratings. This is certainly way better than the average snapshot I see on Photo.Net.

    Lichens on Rock

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    Good composition and tonality. The color harmony is the slight flaw in this image. Blue-Yellow or Blue-Orange is more typical. I might suggest warming the green yellow tones of the lichen. The lichen I find here in Wyoming is often yellow or yellow orange in color. But if you like it where it is, leave it alone.
  2. The color and light here are lovely and this is certainly a good image. But the composition is a little weak. IMO the eye wanders a bit on the left side of the image and the base of the evergreen on the upper right is a slight distraction. A slight recrop could be made to take advantage of a strong diagonal line and unify the image. See what you think.

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  3. A lovely composition and great color harmony.

    I would agree with Doug's comment about a slight crop on the left side. Also the polarizer is a bit overdone on the sky here. The sky could be evened out in Photoshop by building a soft mask and adjusting the levels across it using the mask.

    I do think the addition of clouds would spoil the strong color harmony here.

  4. The light in this version of this classic shot is somewhat mediocre and flat. Sometimes we have to wait for the great light a long while. Sometimes we run out of vacation before it arrives. :-(
  5. A very nice composition. The only improvement I might suggest is cropping about 5% off the left side. This would set the moon off center more and remove the tiny bit of dead space I see there.
  6. I would tend to agree with Marcs critique.

    The color and tone are great, but the strength of the image lies in the forground. We need more of it to pull us in and make the image flow.

    In it's current form it is truncated and my visual path slams into it hard and stops. Perhaps there was something that kept you from including more of it to complete the flow of the image. Only you know what was up here.

  7. IMO this image has some excellent light, color and tone but suffers from mediocre cropping. The land mass on the upper left part of the image detracts from the overall composition and hurts the color harmonies.

    A recrop as suggested would to me make it a very good rather than merely a good image.

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