jean_schweitzer

I'm impressed by the light. How can you shot the sun directly and keep the colours of the picture as they are? The composition could be improved I think, myabe it was to cold to find the right composition and we dont know whats on the left side of the ship Maybe more of it would have improved the picture?

 

If you have time have a look on my picture sent for critic earlier today, thanks, Jean

Works well to me, maybe you vould have tried to avoid the shade by moving on the right side, to make the composition even more simple (simple is not boring..), A funny hing you could have tried is to put the moon in the hole..

 

If you have time have a look on my picture sent for critic earlier today, thanks, Jean

Despite it is not very simple this picture works well to be there is a nice harmony is shapes and colors.

 

If you have time have a look on my picture sent for critic earlier today, thanks, Jean

I first though the red thing was a boat... unfortunately it isnt but with a bit of ps work it could be one...and I would also make a bit of cropping work. The picture is tremendous, it is a pity those small details...Jean

Maybe not very original, but character anyway because of the geometry, I just regret the black spots.

Jean

This is the picture that has immediatly catched my eye in your rich folio.

jean

I like the motive of the picture as well as the colour. I understand your question about the lines and I think I have the same feeling thát there is something that is not as it shoud be. You cant have both the roof line horizontal and the wall line vetical unless you are in the right position and have the right equipment. So in this case I would have composed the picture without the slice of sky on the left that do nor add in the picture and would have so kept the horizontal roof line without the vetical line is so obviously not vertical. Best wishes, Jean

Thank you for your comments ratings ad impressions on "impression"

Jean

I'm not 100% sure I like the framing. I would be tempted to say it is a good idea, but I cant avoid to think how would the picture be if you supress the one on right side. This said I love the picture. jean

I love the idea, the top left is distracting, jean

an old picture reworked,thanks for any comment & rating, Jean

Arthur yes it is digital, hoe well it is very si,ple indeed. There are several effects possible I do not remember exactly how I did, but it was not very difficult. Jean

OK André sure your cat is more beautiful.... but mine is more imaginative. You are right he is only 3months old or so, thank you all for the positive comments.

Jean

I do not think this can be improved...funny the ressemblance of our cats (see the other one sent a bit earier on this forum...)

Jean

This picture has just all!

Almost perfetct!

Jean

Maybe you should have moved on the left not to have the a bit distracting window frame and also more of the face, but its easier to comment than taking the picture...

Jean

Sometimes animals decide for us, it appears it could be a great idea.

Thank you for rating and commenting. Jean

I love that kind of picture. Well done, well seen..Jean

Im also fascinated by trees alignements...Jean

was it in the german Schwartzwald?

Only 2 pictures in this incredible folder! send more of this kind!!!Jean

I agree it is excellent, but I wonder if you did try other compositions. The hand is one strong element, why not keeping it as the main one by eliminating a part of the face (keeping the mouth and nose but no more)?

Did you try? I'm quite certain it will have a stronger impact. let us know what you think.

Jean

Jean

hypnotized or hypnotizing? Thank you for ratings and comments,

Yes the little cat is growing....

 

Jean

Dorothy

You have a very interesting folio, but the pictures are very difficult to "see" because of the colour border. You should remove them all and replace for ex. either by a black border or a white + thin grey.

This we alllow us to appreciate fully the pictures. You can replace the pictures without loosing the comments and ratings. Jean

Arthur, we all know this portrait, I though it was mine...Jean

(Well it cant be in fact. I have less equipment, but the text is also doing well to me).

Wouldnt it work better in landscape format?

Jean