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d_gillespie

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    Untitled

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    Very interesting composition, the model seems to be trying to fit in the frame. I may have suggested a less severe PP frame. The fogging on her left side is a little distracting, maybe it could be refined.

    Snow

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    I like the composition except for the upper left. IT would be completely abstract if the rocks were not in the frame. It can be tricky to shoot snow and shadows. Well done.

    Pollen...

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    The detail and composition are fine,I am wondering about the color and its saturation. If the intense color of the picture is accurate, what an explosion of saffron, tangerine, egg yolk and orange you have.
  1. I really think, and not too often, this image is better in color, especially the way you have emphasized the saturated red. The small amount of turquoise is just enough to really balance this nice shot.

    Night Market

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    This looks like an interesting scene, however, for me the overall darkness - while perhaps accurate - takes away details that may fill in more of the image's context.

    Untitled

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    There are several examples of similar shots where the image does not have the harsh blown out light. It overpowers the composition and makes the focus and contrast suffer.

    The Eye Doctor

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    I will regret this but I think the photographer needs to sit after the child for a check up. I really would have enjoyed this shot with tighter focus. Great idea.

    Still

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    This is a very sculptural image. The delicate lighting is slightly compromised when the highlight on the models breast goes pure white. It may require some minor adjustment or a re-shoot. As a figure and light study it is good.

    Untitled

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    Very nice composition, I wonder if its not too nice? The water seems different on the underside of the subject leaf. All of the background leaves appear to be completely saturated, this central one is not. Perhaps that is the essence of this image.

    Sharp Blue

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    As an altered image, I am not sure what modifications have been made and to what effect. As a photograph of sharps knives I would imagine the focus would be much "sharper".

    Untitled

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    I like the vivid colors and sharpening, I wonder if the composition might merit some work. It is pretty static with the blue boat so centralized. DId you consider other POVs? Nice work.

    Tree

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    With a central figure in silhouette, the focus really does demand close attention. I really like the composition,, but think an increase in the sharpness of focus could really push this toward a better image.
  2. The composition is nice but the exposure is a tad bright and the contrast may not fit such a soft scene. This intimate garden should be a place of secret meeting, the harsh light seems out of place. Really picky here but the metal railing verticals elements do not seem to be true 90 degrees, maybe slightly tilted, or just me. Be careful with the sky, its getting blown out.
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