d_gillespie
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With such a delicate high contrast subject the focus must be tack sharp. This one has great potential with more accurate focus and depth of field.
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I think the lighting especially at the nose of the car is a bit dark. I also think the framing may be reconsidered either keeping the entire door number (54?) or not, cutting it of is a bit distracting. -
Our eyes go naturally to the highlights, and the depth of field challenges are exposed. The focus on the tip end of the flower is not sharp enough, for my taste. Very good lighting and composition.
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My monitor, or the photo's colors are not in agreement. Purple sky and yellow greenish skin tones give this a surreal feel.
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I have written and deleted two comments and both are related to the couple in the doorway. Would the image be different, better, stronger if they were inside, seated? Are they coming in or is that hesitation? There is something here but I am struggling with exactly what it is. -
No really, you can have the last piece of cheese cake, I will have some crackers or maybe just call the police... -
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Rich color and texture draw me in to this fine image, it seems almost too big for the two folks in the boat. Almost. -
Strong powerful image that is trashed by the addition of "by Corine". Sad to see great work compromised. If the fear is someone taking the image perhaps consider not posting. Really fine edgy grungy shot otherwise.
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I like that. This one has so much energy. I may also be a platform shot for some artistic applications. I could see some layers of colors and other stuff. Cheers
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There are a lot of things to like about this shot. One thought would be to change the perspective. Or consider adjusting the frame to reduce the background above the far bridge. It has the look of a tourist snap, a very good one but still a little stiff in composition. -
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The cropping thought is valid, but is tighter the correct direction? Clearly the arm is the issue, I would continue working on the area under the arm where just a bit of light hits the subject's (mannequin's?) hair. I like the lighting, I think the issues may be adjustments to the composition.
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Scary is another possible title. The capture is great, I think you might consider a bit more contrast to make it punch a little more. Her hair color and the background tones are fighting a little. There are a few small highlights that are blown to pure white, maybe bring those back just a bit. She has my full attention.
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Tony,
Many of your BW shots are great, this one has a few distractions for me. The artist is clearly the subject but the sky and cupola on the adjacent brick building are competing for my attention. Perhaps is an issue of contrast or framing. Consider some post production work or perhaps a re-shot if that is possible.
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I love everything except the title, Peacefulness. The subject is in difficult terrain with only the backpack, hat and clothes. Great image, perhaps a different thought on the part of the trekker. Isolation, Determination, Fortitude?
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