jennea

June 1, 2005

I am intrigued by the surrealness of the sky in relation to the greenery. Beautifully done.

June 1, 2005

Nice capture of details, however I believe your focus was intended to be the glasses. Unfortunately because it was not metered for the glasses, the top and bottom portions of the photo distract the viewers eye from your intended subject.

May 31, 2005

I feel like emotionally they are so very far apart. Is this what you were trying to get across?

May 31, 2005

She has such a sweet face and the emotion you captured is wonderful. It seems that it is exposed for the background instead of her face and this takes out some of the umph of the photo. Though I do love the yellow flowers and how they frame her.

May 31, 2005

Great background, it's too bad the sky washed out.

May 31, 2005

Excellent storytelling! Maybe allow just a hair more space between her and the left edge.

May 26, 2005

The sky and water work well together to set a mood and draw the viewer into the city. At first glance I almost felt as if I was watching HDTV. Great image.

May 24, 2005

I would love to hear what you think.

May 22, 2005

The colors are off, at least on my monitor. The child is orange. Is this the way it is supposed to look?

May 21, 2005

Great idea.

May 20, 2005

Nice composition with the lights in the background and the way you framed your subject. There are two things that bother my eye, though. One, the purple spot on the subject's sleve. The other is that the light casts two light stripes through the subject's hair. I'm no photoshop whiz, but I'm sure if you had the talent these two things could be corrected if you so chose. Other than that it is an interesting photo.

May 19, 2005

This is a nice idea and was executed fairly well. My only note is that the man to the far left has tree limbs in front of him. But I'm just being picky.

May 19, 2005

Nice, but I'm not fond of the tree right behind him. It washes out his hair.

May 19, 2005

Neat idea, but the composition could be better. I think I can see you in the reflection also.

May 19, 2005

It is interesting because it takes a moment to figure out what you are looking at.

May 18, 2005

The baby's face is out of focus which throws off the aesthetics in my opinion.

May 17, 2005

Nice, but the lower right corner of her dress is distracting. I do enjoy the flow of the flag and veil together.

May 15, 2005

I at first thought I would like it better cropped, but once I saw the cropped version I was not as drawn into the image. I actually think the blown out part forces the eye to the pointed finger which then makes you look at the child's hands. Beautiful storytelling.

May 14, 2005

What do you think?

May 14, 2005

I really enjoy the tones and depth to her face. It makes her seem alive. My only thought for enhancing is the framing. I think you need to have pulled out just a hair.

May 14, 2005

Everyone always loves this one, but I'm not sure my feelings for it. What do you think?

May 14, 2005

Nice composition, but nothing seems to be in focus. This would be ideal if his eyes and/or the scissors were in focus. I love the colors however.

May 14, 2005

The only thing I would change is that the whites in the lower part of the image are white and those in the upper right ate yellow. But I haven't begun to master flash and I know it can be tricky.