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jennea

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    Untitled

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    I would like to see what she is doing with her hands. Moving the lens slightly to the left would have made for a more interesting composition. Your capture of water droplets is a nice addition.

    Wedding Glow

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    Beautiful background, though I don't much care for the bright plant on the lower left. I'm thinking this could be a remarkable photo if composed differently. Perhaps a crop is in order?

    Charlies Aunties

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    Since it seems you were going for the posed look, the children playing in the background disturb the image. Maybe crop in on the ladies, therefore cropping the kids out?

    Untitled

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    ...I was playing around with the camera using film I hadn't used before and trying to alter

    my photographic perspective. I'd appreciate your thoughts.

    Cheese!

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    Lynnea, thanks for your critique. I must say, you caught a great expression and composed it well. I'd love to see more of your work. J

    Pause !!!!

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    The scan doesn't look so great, but the image itself is very nice. The composition and lighting give me the feeling of nerves before the wedding.

    city street

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    It seems to be exposed for the background, but not for their faces. This might be one of those you need fill flash to get proper exposure of both.
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