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asimh

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    love the reflection - looks like pointilism(?) - its been a while since high school art class. only suggestion i have is to perhaps crop out the brick lining(?) at the bottom, but if possible to keep the red flower intact and also cropping out some of the top, and just a hair off the right side by the rock. by not seeing the fish and the border, it will take the viewer longer to realize that this is a reflection.

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    jeff, i didnt see your other version of this shot in your folder. to me, the mid ground lighting isn't that big of a deal. i hope you dont mind me taking the liberty of doing this, but when i saw this pic, this is what it was saying to me.

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    good subject and composition. to me, this shot is YELLING to be converted to black/white. another interesting vantage point would be taking the shot from more of an angle instead of straighton. that would also be interesting i think. good job!

    harmony

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    interesting cups, but i dont quite see a plane of focus on the right cup - is it down by the cherry on the left? i think to show the artwork of the cups, perhaps a tad more DOF might be needed. also, please resize according to PN guidelines.

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    please resize appropriately. i would also crop out some of the rock formations in the foreground on the left - it is a bit distracting even though it's OOF. good subject!

    Dome de Miage.

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    great desolate shot! too bad the curve with the people is to the right and not the other way. thus, we can't see their shadow and since they are sooooo far away, i had to really peer at my screen to even notice them. mother nature isn't always cooperative! once again, very good shot! btw, i also prefer this crop.
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