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tmjacobs

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  1. A panorama of 16 HDR photos in a 8x2 grid, so 48 photos were made for

    this. Perhaps I like to show too much in one photo, but I liked the

    juxtaposition of the sunny left and the darker right part as well as some of the

    details: the arches on the left, the glass and the red spot on the wall.

    Comments welcome. Please view the large version, that's really essential

    with this photo: in the small version too many details are lost. Thanks for

    viewing.

  2. The nave of Norwich cathedral in late afternoon sunlight coming through the

    stained glass in the west window. Comments welcome, thanks for watching.

    Please view the large version.

  3. It's barely noticeable, but it is slightly tilted. Seriously though: I don't think the angle has a function here, in other areas of photography it can add a dynamic touch, but here it just doesn't work, at least for me. Nice colors though.

    Balanced rock

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    I agree with Tim's comment: light is rather flat. You should photograph this (much) closer to either sunrise or sunset. Then the red colors come to life. Composition isn't particularly interesting, the balanced rock is too close to the edge to be the main subject and the other rocks are just not interesting enough.

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    This has quite a strong color cast and needs some color correction IMO. I took the liberty to do some quick PS adjustments to show what I mean, hope you don't mind.

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    This is much better than the other shot (with the dead tree) I commented on. Light is a lot more beautiful. What I don't like -but it's not that prominent- is the slight flare on the right. Good detail BTW.
  4. Stephen, thanks for your comments. I had thought of getting closer to the pool, but....I wanted to keep my feet dry: the last few yards to the pool were very boggy.

    The darkness of the foreground is deliberate: making it lighter might add detail, but I feel the darkness accentuates the sunlit mountains more and adds more 'drama'. The lack of detail also has to do with the resizing: the large version (this is a pano of 3 photos) does show a lot of detail in the foreground vegetation.

  5. I agree with Mark: the photo has some nice (PS-ed, I presume) textures and colors and a moody atmosphere, but the model doesn't fit at all in this mood - both in her expression and the fact that it looks like you excluded her from the treatment you gave the rest of this image. It almost looks as if she's standing in front of a photo instead of being in this hallway.
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