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tmjacobs

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  1. While sunlight is great for most photography, it can be tricky for portrait photography, because of almost unavoidable blown out areas, as is the case here. The use of bouncing sunlight, with a reflector, would probably have given better results.
  2. Lovely, but needs some (more) postprocessing: the dark areas have a green color cast,which is especially unnatural in the lower area of the lake and the reflection of the red mountain. Must have been great standing there!
  3. Composition could be better IMHO. The buildings are too much hidden behind walls/hedges/trees, and the foreground is too chaotic.

    A gravestone up close, for instance, might have given a nice foreground element.

    Wine Country

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    The tree is a nice foreground element, but a large part of the foreground has an uninteresting texture. It would seem to me that getting close to the grape trees would have given better photo opportunities.
  4. A small but lovely cloister in Segovia. The stretching of the outer parts -

    most notably the iron window frame on the right is because this is a

    composite of several photos. I preferred the 'planar' projection that can

    cause this stretching, but it keeps straight lines straight, opposed to

    spherical projection which curves straight lines. There was too little room to

    capture this in one photo, even with my 10-22mm (with 1.6 crop factor

    though). This is also HDR to capture the extreme contrast on this sunny

    day.

    Comments welcome, please view the large version.

  5. The lovely cloister of Las Duenas in Salamanca. In case you notice the not-

    so-perfect symmetry: this is not a square but an irregular pentagon, with

    one smaller side on the far right. HDR photo. Comments welcome, please

    view the larger version.

  6. Especially if you ask the viewers to view this larger I don't quite understand why you have designed such a large border. It's quite stylish -you can imagine what it looks like hanging on the wall- but I would have preferred a bigger photo, with a small frame, if at all. Nice photo though.

    Half Dome

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    Perhaps wait for better (warmer) light. And I think it's a bit too centered, a bit more landscape on the left would have been better IMHO. Exposure and detail are good though.

    Desert Sunset

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    I came here through a link from the forum discussion about 'HDR without the cartoon look'. Although this and your other photos don't have the cartoon look, their HDR origin is still too noticeable IMO. Colors are a bit too saturated, landscape is too bright and the sky too dark with too little contrast in it - the white edges of the clouds should pop out more. If you go for a spectacular image, ignore my remarks, but if you want realism, you should do some postprocessing and/or alter the tone-mapping settings.
  7. In this telephoto the hills have an almost 'Himalayan' grandeur, where in fact

    people of all ages can easily walk them, provided in winter you might need

    cheap crampons for some of the steeper snowy parts. In the previous photo

    in this folder ("Cat Bells & Derwent Water from Walla Crag") you can see

    these hills in their context. Comments welcome, please view larger.

    Untitled

          6
    A real vertical pano follows the same rules as a horizontal (well....as any photo for that matter): you should not have the feeling that you're looking at an arbitrarily chosen part (or slice, in case of pano's) of landscape, but at a self-contained composition. To be honest I think in landscape a vertical pano has not so much use, since landscape is mostly a horizontal 'thing'- hence the name horizon. I've only seen a few convincing vertical landscape pano's. I can imagine a succesful vertical pano with trees, for instance.

    Foggy Morn

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    IMHO it's too centered, also the vignetting is rather extreme, not only it gets darker but near the sides there's a purpleish color cast.

    I think I would have made more use of the tree behind the foremost tree: if you would have moved forward, the trees would be darker giving the image more contrast. I did some quick PS adjustment to show what I mean, hope you don't mind.

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