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Smaller aperture. Get the foreground in focus, -
Crop out the individual on the left. -
Terrible lighting, and bad composition/framiing. The subject is worth a retake though I think. -
Nothing much goiong on here except bad lighting, and focus. -
Very flat. -
Very well done, -
Looking at the large view this is well done. I like the comp. My only critique would be that the sunflower SHOULD have been much brighter. Maybe not so much as to overpower the pink flower, but enough not to have been distractingly dark. -
Personally, I dislike the fluorescent lighting cast. -
Lose that godawful frame! -
More great IR from HN. BUT this one looks tilted downward to the right. Makes the picture unbalanced. Notice the line at the end of the bridge path, and the abutments on the front. Both give a decided lean. -
One of the brush limbs, but not both. -
Beyond the curtain on the right is totally unnecessary. -
The picture is just waaay to cluttered. All the junk in the background simply distracts (putting it politely), should have used a wide open aperture and blurred that backreound out. -
<p>"</p> <p ><a href="/photodb/user?user_id=2290293">Jamie Robertson</a> <a href="/member-status-icons"><img title="Frequent poster" src="/v3graphics/member-status-icons/1roll.gif" alt="" /></a>, Aug 19, 2014; 12:27 p.m.</p> <p>I think we're all wasting our time. The OP hasn't been back with a response or even left a comment to say thanks."</p> <p>But there is a good chance that someone else needing some advice might actually read this thread before asking. hmmmm, then again probably not. ;)</p>
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California, Eastern Sierra, Tuolumne Meadows
didereaux commented on ya_zhang's gallery image in Landscape
Badly lacking a foreground. Also I think zooming/cropping in on those lenticular clouds and mountains would create a more interesting shot. -
I do believe I meant FRAMEABLE, and not flammable. lol -
To my eye you have two maybe three shots in this. As it stands it is too busy and lacks any real subject. Could go with a bit of warming as well. -
Maybe its just me. But lately there seems to be a trend of shooting nudes in odd position with bluish cast. That to me produces a good Medical examiners forensic shot of a crime scene. -
The sky and distant mountains add nothing to this scene. By lowering your view to crop out those you would add more of the foreground rock to give depth. You could also crop the left side a bit, as it almost appears blurred. Since you shot this with bad light (mid-day) you really need to tweak that contrast. -
California, Eastern Sierra, Tuolumne Meadows
didereaux commented on ya_zhang's gallery image in Landscape
Without a foreground object to give it depth this becomes a snapshot. -
Nice stock photo shot. Really. -
Unique. Odd, and a bit disconcerting, but I like it. -
Background blown out, and no fill light on the subject. You got a snapshot. -
OH, so much potential, and you got a snapshot.
