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    drum lesson IMG_8975aw

    G&V, that is exactly what I was referring too. nice job, illustrates perfectly.
  2. As others have said, nice shot. I would not crop the left out...that is what is part of the story. It is the safe harbor the ship is leaving. Maybe you just have to be a sailor to understand/ ;)
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    Salsa Face to Face

    Really good street shot. The expressions make the picture...especially the other dance in the background. Can't really find anything to critique about this shot.
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    moonset

    The stand-ins did their job. I have often wondered why moon shot fanciers rarely take those setting shots. I suppose they are night owls and sound asleep just before dawn. ;)
  5. I agree. Definitely a fun shot...and a very good one at that.
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    Temporale sui girasoli

    Nicely done. Excellent composition. Maybe the saturation/vibrancy of the grass and flowers in the left foreground is a bit heavy. But overall a really nice shot.
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    'Delayed Billing'

    The extremely noisy water background kills this otherwise neat abstract.
  8. Nice BW! Neat subjects. Too bad the guy is staring right into the camera. That really phonies up an otherwise neat street shot.
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    DSC_0654

    It has a decided tilt downward to the right.
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    Sally

    Marvin you have done better.  ;) Trite subject, but what kills it is the background.  If it had been composed such that the flinging hair and water was against a simpler background it probably would have worked...with a tighter cropping.
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    Autumn leaves in duckweed

    Very bland, flat.  Lacks all vibrancy, which stifles detail.  Subject matter, and framing are good.
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    I'm writing to you...!

    I like this shot.  It captured a mood perfectly.  I do think a bit more contrast (not much, just a touch) would improve it.
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    Portrait of a Friend

    reflections in glasses, and awkward tilt pretty much do this shot in.
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    drum lesson IMG_8975aw

    Here's the bluish cast again that seems to be so popular lately. In a word it sucks in shots like these. People are not bluish tinged unless dead. But more specific to of the drum bodies. this photo by cooling it down you lose all the vibrancy of those (got to be vibrant) colors. Otherwise this is a great shot with good framing and super subjects.
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    sunflower IMG_4066aw

    It seems to me that you need some selective color highlighting in the center of the flower.
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    Grandpa at Wentz Farm

    Marvin, I took a look at your gallery.  Honestly can you say this shot belongs amongst the?  there are some really good shots in there.   ...and calling someone stupid because they gave an honest critique that you didn't like  will get you nowhere, it will get you fewer critiques though, and that will impair your learning considerably.
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    The Idea of Duende

    Uncertain as to your meaning of 'duende'. Is the heightened emotions, or the troll? Although the shot kinda fits both, which is kinda neat.
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    DSC_2088a

    Pretty good rendition of the classic iconic shot from there.
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    car 2

    For BW to work especially for things such as this you must get as wide a tonal range as possible. This one simply lacks completely the upper light range(s).
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    trunk

    I critiqued the first one which was in color and mused that it might be a better BW. I was RIGHT! Don't happen often enough though. ;)
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    which way to go...

    If there exists 'the most unflattering female pose', then I vote this one as it.  It just kills the shot.  Perhaps puzzlement was meant, but dumpy-frumpy won the day.
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    View Larger

    first glance good, second glance not so much and here's why. "AJ Bart Jon, thanks for your comments. You have a number of great shots in your Water folder!!! The filter that I used here is called a flood filter by Flaming Pear. It is an add on for Photoshop. AJ" That effect stood out like a sore thumb to an old PS'er. Notice that the curvature of the seed head is NOT accurately portrayed in the reflection. given the other qualities of this shot though my advice would be to stick to your camera, and use PS sparingly, and cheap, old filters, presets, and actions, never.
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    Dead fish and apples

    A ,ost unappetizing shot! fortunately it very flat, lacking color and saturation. Whish actually might be a positive thing because if it were improved it might actually cause some to lose their cookies, only adding more to the bucket. However, from a compositional point it is quite good. You just need to change the places you hang out at. ;)
  24. I'll get to the kudos later. My first look caused me to immediately think the following ( Iam telling this true): My gawd what kind of sick b*st*rd would take a picture of an amputated foot? the thought passed in millisecond. This is a really, really good picture from the photo itself, to the photoshopping. Great concept, and great execution. Told you I'd get to the kudos. ;)
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