It is a nice shot. where did you shoot it?
I think the issue is that the brightness between the foreground and the background and sky seems off. The background is in shade or you used a graduated ND filter. But the sky also seems like it should be brighter to match the brighter foreground. You took it very early in the morning or late afternoon. So it could just be that the upper is just more shaded.
Compositionally, I think it would have been more exciting if you stood in the middle of the road. It seems safe enough.