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I like the concept of this image and the subdued colours help.
However, I also think it is technically and compositionally lacking. Perhaps it is the scan, as far as techincal quality is concerned, but you seem to have lost shadow detail and the image isn't very sharp either.
Compositionally, I don't really like the dog being in the centre of the frame. I hope you won't mind the quick and dirty Photoshop hack that I've attached. It's just a suggestion of how you might improve the image.
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Seemingly unaffected by the cold Dutch weather during winter, these
sheep were just waking up when I passed by (or at least I hope I
didn't rudely awaken them). However, they did look up rather hopeful
at me -- as if they expected me to feed them, or even free them from
the cold frozen meadow.
Anyway, I thought they looked rather cute. Opinions?
Thanks for your time and comments.
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Interesting concept; I would have liked the shadow to be a bit more well-defined: darker perhaps, no interfering other shadows and lines.
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I like the flow of the railing, but the steps themselves are a bit indistinguishable.
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Nice angle, might have aggerated it a bit more. Too bad the bottom part is rather dark compared to the top. Still, well done.
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Nice shot; blue seems almost too good to be true. The fall colours of the leaves are somewhat dissapointing, though.
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As per Marielou Dhumez's suggestion, I'm posting this one for
critique. Good use of the angles and patterns present it the
building? Does the convergence bother you, or doesn't it matter much?
Thank you for your time and comments.
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For contrast, consider this image:
Main building, Elswout Park. This is the wacky wide-angle shot I would shoot a while ago.
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Too dull? Too straight-on?
A year or two ago, I would probably have used 24mm to create
a "weird", tilted image of the old tanks. However, recently, I have
come to like the more simple, straight-on shots. I wonder what people
on photo.net think. Too dull?
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Impressive colours! However, by looking at it, I haven't a clue what this is. As a photograph, this is a bit too confusing for me.
As Photoshop art, I think you did at least a nice job, but I don't quite know how to judge that. Hence, just a comment and no ratings.
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Nice still life shot. Bit high contrast and tight crop, I think.
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Too bad the glass is so reflective (polarizer?) and that the man isn't more "clearly" smoking. Still, a very nice illustration of what the poster wants to promote.
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A cool idea, but you seem to have more of a surprised look than a hungry look on your face (and surely the "surprise" would come only after the flash, if it hadn't been staged).
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A simple and well-contained image. Good use of the leaves in the foreground. Could perhaps use a little bit more punch.
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Much better than the straight-forward Eiffel Tower shots. The large black blob at the bottom doesn't help, though, neither does the tilt to the right.
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Nice perspective indeed, but I'd like a much tighter crop as well as a larger image (perhaps lose the huge border).
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I don't mind the tilt very much (if anything, it makes the image seem more like a "quick catch" rather than staged). The vignetting helps, I think, because it appears the person is running towards some light or such -- it gives a bit of a tunnel effect to the photo.
I am not too convinced that the washed-out arms are such a good idea, though. The person seems to have left a bit too much behind.
Over all, very well done!
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I think the subject is too small and the centered horizon and subject don't really help either. Nice light, though and the foreground is interesting too.
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I think you were trying to include too many shapes and patterns in this image. Something simpler might have worked better.
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The scale presented in this image is what makes it work. Excellent!
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Quite a contrast between the building itself and the (colour) of the light. Not sure if I really like it, though... can't quite make up my mind.
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Tim, Tris wrote: "[...] but one might hope for a site run (or at least originally conceived) by a professor of photography (and from what I've seen of his work a fairly competent working professional to boot) to offer a little bit more in the department of taste. It is obvious to me that this site's day-to-day management was long ago abandoned by the good doctor to whomever . . . and these people have no good grasp. "
Isn't he referring to photo.net and mistakenly thinking Philip Greenspun is a professor of photography?
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I guess I was trying to get too many points across at once, and failed. Let me try again. I promise togive after this one -- POW discussions are usuallyrather tiresome and often seem to have to do so littlewith the image itself (and I admit that I am just asguilty by posting this).
First, I suppose I'm more of a "I don't know art, but I know what I like" kind of person. I have noformal training in photography, art or anything remotelyin that direction. Just a little background info on me,so you know how seriously to take my comments :-)
I do, of course, realise that tripods, bracketing andall kinds of other technical excellence will not guarantee to produce art. In fact, that's why I specifically mentionedthe bracketed landscape photo and the pro-lit portrait.
This photo is obviously a good (fun) idea executed ratherpoorly. I still think it's a good photo. And I firmly believe that good photos, art or not, can be valid choicesfor POW. POW images should teach us something: technicalexcellence, patience, catching the moment, or having funand just shooting something different. I think this imagefalls in the last category. Perhaps there are better imageson photo.net that would fall in the same category and perhaps one of them should have been chosen.
By the way, Vuk, I don't understand how the comments of one single user (in this case, me) can say a lot about photo.net. But perhaps that's irrelevant.
After consuming adequate amounts of liquid barley, the session ends in a group consensus of the next week's Photograph of the Week
-- http://www.photo.net/photodb/photo-of-the-week/about
I think this page makes it clear that POW selection isn't overly elaborate or deeply profound. Perhaps it should be.
I wonder, has anyone ever asked the photo.net crew if there are any job openingsin the POW Elf department?
Main building, Elswout Park, The Netherlands
in Architecture
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Instead of creating yet another pleasing image of the stately mansion
in Elswout park (in the Netherlands), I though I'd have a go at a
wacky shot. I used a 24mm lens and polarizing filter to create
something more striking.
What do you think? Good job? Over the top?
Thank you for your time and comments.