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elaine_roberts1

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    Duty

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    Nice shot. It'd be nice if there were a little more separation between the fluffy tail on the hat and the background, but its anice shot that shows off the uniform and intensity of the guard

    Bike

          9
    A nice, intense candid shot. Two suggestions: I'd like to see a little more space above his head, and perhaps just a bit more contrast.
  1. This is a lovely shot. The pensive look, the colorful bench, the worn wall, the afternoon sunlight...it all adds up to a great candid portrait/street shot. The highlights are a bit more blown out than I normally care for, but that is only a small distraction from a great image.

    Sunset 3

          5
    Simple, nothing new, but quite evocative. The lens flare in the front center on the boat is a shame, but I like how you've gotten an exposure that has the moodiness of a silhouette yet retains detail in the shadows. Very nice job.

    Dancers

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    Wow--how surreal! This turned out very well; it looks like an oil painting. I'd recommend taking just a little off the top and bottom so there's not quite so much black space. Very cool though.

    Untitled

          4

    I love the composition, and agree that the the church adds a lot of interest. I think though that this could be improved digitally--mainly by getting rid of some of that haze over the mountains. I've attached a version that I worked on in PS using layers to make adjustments to the mountains (levels, contrast, saturation, color) and overall. What do you thinkK?

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  2. How intriguing!I'm not sure whether this was just an experiment, but its an interesting photo: makes me wonder what the story is that's being told. Did a sister just discover her long-lost sibling? Did the blonde inthe foreground just pull a gun? It looks like a still from a movie--or even more so, from a play (Perhaps it was?).

    new age

          5
    Awwww! I like combination of car, horsies, and McDonalds, although it's a pity the sky is so boring. Ah well. Might have helped if you'd waited for the horse to stop chewing and raise her head. Still, its a nice shot! Keep that eye out for this kind of stuff.

    Mumbai taxi

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    It's a shame his face is out of focus, but I love the intense colors, the blurred images outside the taxi, as if just teasing the viewer with the slightest hints of what's out there beyond the cab's walls!

    Sunny Window

          2
    Some viewers will probably complain about the burned out window scene; I think that the pale colors complement the red draparies. One thing I do wish is that you had been standing directly in front of the window, rather than slightly to the left as you seem to have done here.
  3. I like the composition, but find my self missing the color. We're always tempted to use black and white for winter scenes like this, but I think that having just a hint of color--even if is only a little--makes shots like this really work. Was it originally in b&w, or converted from color?

    Untitled

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    I love the high-key lighting and muted colors, but I'm a little distressed by how her cheek is cut off...maybe a slightly different composition next time?

    Stones

          2
    I like this composition--very simple, and intimate. I can't help but wonder if a slightly different color balance would benefit it--or a slight increase in saturation?
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