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elaine_roberts1

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    Blue Morning

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    This is both interesting and beautiful - a very untraditional sort of landscape that still capture serene beauty. 6/6 Are those volcanic formations, or something manmade?

    new Eyre Square

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    I like the row of flags - adds some nice color. However all the people have me trying to figure out what the main subject of this image is. Is it that woman on the left? The man in the yellow shirt? Zeroing in on one or two people can make a street scene more interesting. Cheers, Elaine.

    Intrigued

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    Beautiful capture of an everyday scene. I love how both parents are turned away, the older child (the girl) is in profile, and the youngest, the boy, is looking right into the lens. There's just enough context (the glimpse of the handlebars, the truck) to know what is going on, but not so much that the faces get lost.

     

    Just a couple of suggestions. I think a square format would work well for this shot: there's some extra space on either side that isn't really adding anything. Also, perhaps burn around the edges a bit to put more of a focus on the kids in the middle.

     

    Excellent work!

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    Graffiti Girl

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    I love the silhouette of the girl, the line of the walls, but the car, I think, doesn't add anything. I think that a cropped version of this - perhaps w/a little perspective correction in Photoshop - would be much stronger. What do you think?

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  1. Congrats, Dariusz! Much deserved.

     

    This is a great image, but it's the series that really shines. I think "Feel the Wind" and "Welcome" are even stronger, although this one is a bit more painterly, almost like an old tintype. I'd love to hear about some of the techniques used to get this effect.

    Nancy

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    Beatiful tones and colors and a nice casual moment. This is a nice shot of your model laughing; did you get any shots like this except with her eyes open? Good job on the exposure and focus.
  2. Wow! is my reaction to this. It took me a while to sort out the perspective, which is very intrigue in. At first I thought I was looking out horizontally onto some kind of long ledge, then I figured it out. Very, very creative. The pattern of lines, the "window", the vaugue figure to the left...this is a 7/7 photo, which I give out very rarely. I look forward to exploring more of your work.
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