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jason j

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    Little Red-Cap

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    I love the lighting, redness in the caps and lips, and flesh tones of the face. Also a wonderful expression. What did the subject say about this photograph?

    Untitled

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    The wonderful lighting does an awesome job of capturing your skin tones and texture. However, what does the model's pose and facial expression convey to viewers? To me, it looks as if the model is turning her gaze away from the viewers gaze. Should we turn away too, even as the photo's beauty compels us to look? Finally, I like the how the crop prevents viewers from seeing too much.

    Untitled

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    Wonderful use of the color red and shoes which tell us more about the model than her sheer beauty. She is a runner, who refuses to be framed simply. Her beauty is something that she earns. What a wonderful storytelling shot!

    Untitled

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    I like both images. The original shows what you saw. The latter shows what you felt. What needs to be done is how to show both views - without making viewers focus on how the picture was made, but instead make viewers focus on its message.
  1. An awesome shot that reminds me of a shot by some famous street photographer of women talking on a park bench. What makes this shot work so well? The lines of course made by the wooden floor, arms, and bench back provide structure. Seven is also a special number, which works well here because everyone is in a dyadic conversation, except for one person at the end of the photo. She is the odd woman out. Finally, expressions on the faces and bright colors are wonderful. Thanks for sharing, this photo reminds me to be alert for linear interactions.

    Untitled

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    Great depth of field and way to capture a decisive moment. I am not sure that the mourning dove is feeding the house sparrow. Indeed, I think that the smaller bird may be telling the big bird to wait for his or her turn.

    Son Down

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    I cropped the top and sides but not the bottom. By the way, I discovered photo.net after seeing some of your photos in a book on how to do digital travel photography that I got from a local library. It's interesting how easy it has become to converse with people who I used to only read about. Thanks for the comments.

    Abstract Flower #1

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    This photo reminds me of some fine art paintings. It is nice that it is recognizable, but abstract, and the shot seems to emphasize the delicacy of each petal. Well done.

    16

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    Wonderful compostion. I love how the door opens onto the world. A metaphorical and lyrical picture. You also do a wonderful job of framing a frame; the door frames the outside and the darkness frames the door. A more spectacular view is the only improvement that I might suggest, but that might undermine the photo's subtly. Great shot!

    my camping spot

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    Here goes: The lake looks a little washed out by the glare. Did you use a polarizing filter? The shadows cast by the boat and tree lack detail and merge together. A good idea that warrants improvement. What does this place look like at dawn or dusk? Perhaps bracketing would be helpful? By the way, the second best way to get comments is to give comments.
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