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Franklin College's Division III football team lost 1 game during the

regular season and scored more than 50 points in half their games.

This is a photo of the quarterback who threw for 400 yards in one of

the greatest playoff games ever seen. North Central won 44-42 on a 20-

yard pass play made with 5 seconds left. The clock showed 0.0 when

the reciever caught the ball in the end zone. Each side fell silent

for a full second as everyone tried to absorb what had just happened.

Nice shot of the boy swinging. Too bad that guy is in the background.

Great timing and DoF. What was your shutter speed? I wonder how you could make the shot sharper and perhaps accentuate the color a little more? How do you like the picture in you crop at the blue pants? I like it more for some reason. Still an intriguing shot.

Does this photo tell you a story about a decisive moment in the game?

The quarterback is looking to the coach on the sidelines for the play.

Good point Joe. I have some similar shots without the sunflare that I will post. Like Mike, I like the sunflare's extra touch like a halo (?), but to reduce the haze, I will use levels. Thanks for pointing this out. It really helps.

I like the shades of white in the window and the bride's dress. This photo tells a wonderful story. I would like to see a little more light in her eyes. Still a beautiful photo.

I like the haze and sunspots. What do you think?

Dynamic shot of running in the air. Shot is a little grainy, but that was probably unavoidable, given the lowlighting. I wish you had gotten lower, so we could see the running back's face better. I also would like to see more of the aspiring tacklers. Congratulations to Hawaii.

Thinking of entering this photo on a contest. What do you think? Also

any suggestions for a title (as well as improvements) would be

welcome.

Comments welcome.

Thanks Fred. Your comments are really helpful.

I like this photo, but think you could have simplified the shot by cropping tighter around the seemingly two headed clown. However, I am probably wrong.

On camera flash and with an arena light behind subject. What do you

think of the result?

Thank you for your feedback.

What would you change?

She is intentionally out of focus.

Capitalism

Interesting colors, compliment and contrast. Black area might be nice space for words, if this photo was for a bilboard. Pic says something about youth fashion.

Lovely shot and presentation. The flower fills the frame and beyond. The green in the lower left corner and on the right side disrupts the composition. Still, the photo says something interesting about detail and symmetry and shapes and lines and circles and textures and tonality.

Shiny cars don't go far. How would you shoot this automobile?

Does the reflection add or detract from this photo? Shot was taken in

a classic car museum showroom. See my portfolio for more information.

Suggestions for improvement needed. Wish I could shoot these cars at

sunrise or sunset. Thanks for looking, as always I will reciprocate.

I gained access to a classic car shop and planned to do a photo essay

on these cars. Please let me know what you think. Advice welcome. I

will reciprocate. Thanks for looking.

This is quite a dynamic photo that makes viewers look again and again to decipher the lines. You also did a wonderful job on the color and details.

The shadow slices in the snow delight me as well, but I wish that I had separated the bush from the fence better.