Jump to content

zigzag

Members
  • Posts

    1,796
  • Joined

  • Last visited

Image Comments posted by zigzag

    Sampo'do'

          2
    It's a lovely effect - CS3 will be responsible for us seeing more of these, which is a good thing. The blue tones work well. It's dark but pleasantly so.

    Patagonia

          6
    Landscapes should show open up to us wondrous views that we may never get to experience ourselves - this does that. These clouds are surreal and the sky is azure blue. This is a great view - are the mountains too dark? Maybe.

    Tree Farm

          20
    I like the full vertical sweep of the first version and think maybe a cloud or darker patch up top would help - still keeping the commanding height. Next time, run down there and move that log, maybe place your camera on a tripod and move all those little foreground distractions out of view - the place your subject with clear light each side.

    Kim#2

          2
    Very well it across the face and shoulders. Falls off a little too fast for me across the arms (though she has big hands, shich should be de-emphasised). Kee[ing the detail in the costume while de-emphasising the cloth is a good idea. The look is good too - like a dancer frozen in motion.

    Leura Cascades

          10
    The photograph is nicely cropped, is from a good viewpoint and has a good shutter duration. The red dirt distracts a little and the greens maybe could come up a bit - in PS you can adjust these channels individually in Hue/Sat (Ctrl-U) which (if you don't already), is something worth just looking at for interest's sake. I am wodering about the far DOF and the f-stop you used.

    Tree Farm

          20

    Yes, a focal subject as others have said. Two exits (in this case) is not good - I am talking about the bright patch at the very top - the eye goes there and escapes the photograph. Colours don't have to be realistic but then you have to be aware that people will think 'Photoshop' and won't 'believe' the scene (brings doubts about 'did she just overlay that deer there at the end' etc). This is often OK as long as you're aware of it.

     

    You have very good ideas here - the trees are commanding in the vertical and the detail is good, sometimes it is worth doing a bit of a clean up of the ground in front of the photo (even temporarily tying a branch back) before taking the picture - Leave nothing but footprints, take nothing but photographs ...

     

    Try a few things while you're there, e.g. get a very wide lens, lay on the ground and take photos upwards - see the convergence.

    Untitled

          2

    Reshoot - it has some very good points, not least being its isolation from the background but...

    1. Those 2 background lines look like antennae.

    2. He needs either to push his chin forward or you need to shoot from slightly above so you don't get the double chin.

    3. Use the 'Expose to the right' trick and then try and retain detail in the clothing when addressing balance etc in photoshop or equivalent.

  1. She looks happy and relaxed but the front-on pose and lighting has the effect of both f(l)attening and broadening. Good texture and shape come from controlling the shadows as you must know. I like the tilt.
×
×
  • Create New...