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zigzag

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  1. This is very nice Yung. I love the way you have lined up the triangle of the rocks with the bright sky. The illumination on the rocks highlights them well and the slow shutter is just enough to give the sea a soft feeling but still keep its shape. The different coloured rock, bottom left is a distraction and it would have been nice to exclude it from the frame. The vignette holds the eye in - giving a direct path up the centre towards the light.

     

    Simple but effective. Thanks for sharing.

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    A lovely photo that holds interest throughout. The lightness of the foreground model catches the eye but you can't help being drawn by the silvery path of water into the picture along the grey triangle. The heavy black framing holds you in of course - it's just a little too dominant for me but the idea is good. The foreground footprint broke the spell for me just a tiny bit but it made me realise that this is snow and the model is very brave to be so cold.

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    Nice dynamic cut (X shape) to the photo and good model expression - nicely fills the frame - leaves you feeling you want to see more of her - which is a good thing.

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    School Project? This has a lovely shape and great colouring. The eye contact and use of the body to lead in is good as is the lighting. The thing growing out of her belly is interesting but the black night could do with just a little detail to round out the photo.

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    Nice and dynamic in pose & wind effect. Lovely highlightng and balanced ambioent. That forward leg looks just a little awkward to me - the grass breaks it up and helps - her body is kinda straight on there broadening out.

    Marina

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    There's a nice warm light along her body and a cheerful smile. The diagonal body pose is good and the scarf works. You do see a lot of white in her eyes - perhaps you have one where she looks directly into the camera? Or even leaning her head against her arm and looking.

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    I like the use of colour and the strong face. The shadow/negative space does balance it well - at first I was unconvinced and then stared a long time - which must be a good thing. Love your work.
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