d_gillespie
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I realize the © copyright is very important to prevent images from being lifted. I wish we could just do without them. To me it ruins a lovely figure study.
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Good point, that little framing mistake bugs me too. Lucky for me the model forgave my mistake, she had to, check my profile to see why.
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There are quite a few strong elements here to work with. I would encourage another visit to this site (if that is feasible) to see what other angles and framing might strengthen this collection of subjects. It is a little disconnected and I am having a bit of trouble with a story this image is trying to tell. You may also wish to see how the scene would be in black and white. Best of luck.
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This tango is hot, but maybe too hot. The lights that give the smoke their glow should be off screen or out of frame. They are taking away from the dancers. -
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I like the stark quality of the composition. I really wold like to see sharper focus. -
A really like the composition, I am not so fond of the over processing of the image. -
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I wonder if the scale and space may be better suited for a landscape orientation?
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The lighting here is excellent. The post and her foot being lost to the edge of the frame is unfortunate. -
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Powerful and strong image. I think all of the post production alterations pushed this image in a good direction, just don't let it get away from you. I may suggest the light under the bridge takes away some of the strong dark base you have created. The inclusion of the banner is critical.
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I like the harsh coldness of this image. I do get the feeling that someone pulled the drawers out just for this picture, they're too regular. If so then documentary may not be the right forum. If not, then its a nice shot and I am way too picky. -
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Beautiful girl, nice tonal range, average composition and image. You have great raw materials, keep pushing. Don't shoot ordinary. Go in very tight on her face, let the background fade away - the clutter doesn't help you. The texture of the tree against the softness of her hair may be all you need.
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This type of stop action is very challenging. Your subjects are framed well but the background has so much visual graffiti it distracts from the moment. I would like to see a bite more sharpness on the focusing, but to rephrase, "this ain't so easy". -
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I like the interesting POV (point of view) but the image is over exposed. I could see this as a more successful image with a black and white approach. The large mass of pinkish brick work really makes metering this shot challenging. I think a different sun angle may help too.
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I really like the composition. I would enjoy a bit more tonal range,it has a little too much contrast for my eye - the nearly white sky is taking away from a nice balance. I would love to see the central subject in sharper focus.
Tian Shan Mountains - NW China
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