david bohn

February 13, 2005

I like this one alot too, mostly because it is a bit out of character for me. I usually light from left to right, but for this shoot I wanted to switch it up to keep me on my toes, and it worked, come to think of it, its been a while since I last switched it up, I think I'll do another right to left shoot soon. Thanks again I appreciate the critiques and comments.

February 13, 2005

Critiques/Comments are what I'm looking for more so than ratings.

Thanks

February 13, 2005

Nem, she is the first pro model I have shot with and she was sooooo easy to work with, I have more shots of her in my models folder check it out, it is so much easier to work with someone who knows what they are supposed to do!

February 12, 2005

critiques/comments, thanks.

February 11, 2005

Very nice, my favorite photo in your portfolio so far. What a wonderful view.

February 11, 2005

I haven't rated this but I would give it a 4/4. Here are my reasons, 4/4 means fair, not bad, not great, fair. The lighting is fair, I know you are trying to create a raw type feel but your background isn't giving me a raw type feel it gives me a plain type feel. You cut her hand off, that bugs me. I LOVE the pose, very feminine and the expression is great, she is really giving you what you need. I hope this helped.

February 11, 2005

Critiques/Comments, thanks.

February 11, 2005

Thanks Dom, I was thinking about that but it is so over done, plus to do it right takes a food stylist and I just dont have the expertise to do it. Thanks again

February 10, 2005

Yes those are other islands around culebra.

February 9, 2005

I keep coming back to your portfolio and you keep posting great images. You really have a "style." You really have a great eye. Keep up the good work

February 8, 2005

Thanks for the critiques guys, I wish that more people would let me know what they think is wrong with this shot, I happen to like it a lot.

February 7, 2005

If you are looking at doing any still life or studio work you should by an off camera flash, if you can also get some diffuser fabric to place in front of it. That will at least help you get softer lighting. Neat idea.

February 7, 2005

Critiques/Comments, thanks. Please don't critique the color as if I

wanted it to be realistic. I WANT the x-process look ;)

February 6, 2005

Very nice, I really like the tiny bit of movement in the faris wheel. Nice work

February 6, 2005

I should have sent the file larger, it isn't soft. If the whole car was in the model would be too small. If it was horizontal the model would be too small, that is unless I was planning to make this fit on the back of a bus. And I like the yellow brick, it breaks up the monontiny of the background. Too yellow? good, I was going for a x-process look. I guess everything you don't like about this photo is everything I like about it!! lol. Thanks for the critique.

February 6, 2005

Critiques/Comments please, thanks.

February 4, 2005

Very good idea, one thing that I think would make this photo better would be red burning embers outlining the edges of the map that are being burned. Of course that would be very difficult to do, but it would be nice. Nice shot.

February 3, 2005

Thanks Sarah.

February 2, 2005

Thanks Gerard, This was just a shot for my portfolio. I really like the challange of working with glass and liquid, even though I cheated with this one.

February 2, 2005

It looks like a star constalation. Almost like a bunch of planets. Very cool

February 2, 2005

Gerard, thanks for the comment, This is actually two shots PSed into one, first I shot the beer against a white background, then a black and I droped the lighter top of the glass on top of the shot against the dark background. I try to stay away from too much PS but in this case it really improved the final outcome.

February 2, 2005

Lessons from me???? Your bio pic is one of my favorite photos on PN. Thanks for your critiques. David

January 31, 2005

There are some nice technical elements at work here (composition, depth of feild) but I have to agree with the first critique. A black and white photo of paint cans? If you were going for a product shot, I might have moved the handle to the other side of the can and you would have to light the logo on the front can a bit better to make the name clearer. Colour would be the only way to go. The only problem I have with this shot is the subject matter. You have shot an artistic B+W of paint cans.............

January 31, 2005

I have stood right there, what a beautiful sight. Nice exposure, it can be really sunny there.

January 31, 2005

No matter how much I like one of my images I can always find somthing that I could have improved on, I guess that is just the way it goes. I have confidence in my abilitys as a photographer, I'm just not much of a business man and I hate tooting my own horn. IE: I would never submit anything under "Fine Art" I feel that it is not for me to decide if my work is Fine Art or not, that is for the viewer to decide. Plus, a lot of what I do is commercial and anyone who tries to tell you that commercial photography/ Fashion photography is art needs to get their head examined.

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