david bohn

I disagree ;)

Critiques/comments, thanks. This image looks its best when viewed

larger.

 

Thanks

whatever you are doing, keep it up, this looks great, wonderful tilt of the head, lighting, etc. If one were to be extreamly picky you could say that the rights were a bit blown out and the necklace doesnt seem to go with the look but overall this is a tremendous photo. 6/6

Thanks for the critique AC, I did desaturate her skin before I printed it out. However this being a "graphic" "fantasy" type shot I'm not toatally convinced that skin tone has to be realistic.

By the looks of the ratings, I should just stick to posting "pretty pictures" The thought of that makes me sick. Any moron with a tiny bit of photographic experiance can make a pretty picture, try making a statement with a photo, or give it some feeling of movement or attitude.

perhaps by not using stupid digital effects.

Critiques/Comments, I know this isn't a "fashion" shot as in

clothing but for some reason it strikes me as more fashion than

portrait. Thanks for your comments.

Man talk about hit and miss, 2/4,3/3 6/5,7/6. I didn't feel the crane was too much of a distraction, but I knew some people would.

Thanks for the critique. I know what you mean about the hair, but I guess that is the price you pay for super high contrast photos.

Thanks for the critiques. I don't think we are going with this one, check out the other shot of this model I uploaded, quite different, and more inline with the other calendar shots. Thanks again.

 

David

Critiques/Comments, thanks

Thanks for the 1/1 with no critique, your a class act my friend.

It is nice to see this shot in a sea of over saturated - over photoshoped sailboat photographs. Nice, calm, relaxing mood. Great work

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Critiques/comments thanks.

very nice, love the eyelashes.

Great image, I personally love the frame, how did you make it? Very X-process look to the color of the shot. Nice mood 6/6

Thanks for the critique, that was the best critique I have EVER gotten from a PN member. I'm not here for praise I'm here for honest helpful opinions from professionals like yourself. Thanks again.

 

David Bohn

This is very cool, it would look awesome printed on Ilfachrome.

Feel free to critique anything about this photo, including fonts,

text placement etc. Thanks

Fantastic Lighting!!! Looks great, I might try to tone down the steel? rail on the table but man! you did a great job here

6o/7a

Thanks Edward, ya, I think I might have an enemy here on PN. Perhaps I critiqued their photo in an unflattering way. Oh well I'm here for helpful critiques like yours not ratings. Plus Dave N. and Alex Lee seem to like my stuff and they seem to be among the more professional posters on this forum so I'm quite proud of that. I could care less if some nature photographer thought my fashion stuff wasn't any good, what does he/she know about fashion photography? Thanks again for your advice.

critiques/comments. I just cut off the back of the truck, Ooops, so

I'm looking for some cropping advice.

 

Thanks

Not really a fashion shot but its about the only catagory that

fits. This shot is for a Car calendar, I really wanted the car to

stand out more than the girls.

 

Critiques Greatly appreciated! Thanks

Paul, I think you might be right. Thanks for the advice, I'm going to give it a try. check it out, what do you think?

http://www.photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=3209882