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Yes it would be better with softer lighting, perhaps you could have hung a bed sheet over the window? Not the easiest thing to photograph. Another problem I have with the highlights is the color in them, they add a blue element that I think takes away from the beautiful red and green of the strawberry. Not bad though, like I say this is a very difficult subject to shoot. -
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excellent shot, not sure what you could do to make it better, Why an apple though? -
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Those were great critiques/comments!!! Very well thought out. I did pose the hands contrary to each other because I really wanted this image to be somewhat disturbing/arresting. You are right about the beer, but I thought it brought in an interesting color element. As for more camera details well lets see if I remember........well I used a Nikon D100 for this and screwed around with the curves to get the "x-process" look. Lighting wise was a 5' softbox to viewers left and a garlic(hairlight) to the upper right casting highlights on the leather chair/my arm/face/and smoke. Chances are it was 200ISO 125 F14. I added the colored beer from one of my commercial shots, the glass was there but there was no beer in it. Thanks again for those great critiques.
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Thanks Thomas that is some good advice. Sometimes I too find that a nice highlight can add to creating shape to the bottle, making it look a bit more 3D, but I'm with ya on the hot reflections that we sometimes get, one trick that I do is to make sure my reflector and softbox fabric is as wrinkle free as possible, you wouldn't believe how much that helps. Thanks for the comment.
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What a great image! This is the most beautiful girl on earth and you did a great job of capturing her. -
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This is one of my favorite photos on PN, keep up the good work. -
It's not an idea it actually happened!!! I was sitting on the grass in a park by the sidewalk and watched it all take place. A girl and her mom walk by she pops the head off the flower, I grab the shot just before some A$$whole stomps on it!
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If you have a weak stomach please look away!
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Thanks for the critiques guys, ya I know I should have put some water drops on it but it was a spur of the moment project type shoot and I didnt have any glycerine around. I have used just plain water before with poor results so I thought I would just shoot it dry. Thanks for your comments.
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Nice, the only thing that bugs me is the blown out highlight on the ring. Ahh the #2, doesn't get much better than that. -
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Beautiful lighting and I like the girls pose/expression but to be honest with you I dont like the other two elements (clock/light). Everything just seems too close together. I like the shadows. 6/5 -
I would not get rid of person in the background and the ...kite? I think adds very much to the photo. It adds an even more carefree type feel to the kiss. I like it just the way it is. This image can not help but give an emotional response to the viewer, good work.
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This is a fabulous image, the only thing I'm not too crazy about is the intensity of the shadow in the upper right corner. Even with that minor imperfection (IMHO) this is a great image.
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Very nice! 6/6 -
Very original, I love it.
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