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toddlaffler

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    The struggle is over

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    Everyone is entitled to a drought once in a while, hang in there. Exucse the pun, but don't get so down on yourself. You're your own worst critic, everyone knows that! :)

     

    Aside from that, toss this one onto the pile of crap!!!! lol, just kidding.

     

    Todd

     

    PS, life can't be that bad, I'll bet you were selected to win 2 free iPod nanos by now, and if not, just hit refresh! ;)

  1. I think it looks a little muddy and flat in their faces. Also watch out for when their faces touch too, because his left eye is being dragged down and it looks droopy because of it. I also find the bright red to be a little distracting too.

     

    Todd

    Untitled

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    This is sweet! A few suggestions. Overall it looks a little flat, try boosting the contrast. Also, I think all the guys (except maybe the groom) should have their hands the same way. On the groom, with his hands behind his back, I think it's making his jacket buldge out a little. Maybe unbutton the jacket, or change hand position? Lastly, I think a better expression from the groom would have been nice. Although he may not have been the smiling type. In that case, ask his groomsmen to help you make him smile/laugh.

     

    Nice job spotting and capitalizing on the potential of your space.

     

    Todd

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