david yama

Compositionaly, I think this is a great photo. I agree with Chris, it is hard to see due to it's small size and pixelation. I would love to see this photo reposted in a larger size so I can see it again. Of the two storm over Vancouver shots, I think this is the better one because of the lighting on the buildings.

 

Happy shooting,

 

David.

I agree about the rug. I think you should try cropping the photo square, it seems like it has nice balance that way. It's a great photo!

I would also try using a tripod and several different apertures to see if you like the different focusing effects you get. I really like the idea alot.

Way groovy. I like it.

Jean,

 

I wouldn't call this luck as you did, it was the payoff of patience and foresight. You did an excellent job with this one!

 

David.

I didn't even realize those *were* fingers until the others commented. Great photo, I too like the graininess.

is nice sometimes! I really like this image, I have looked at it a couple of times now. If you would have just said you used a "soft-focus filter" everyone would have been ooh, nice ah... ; ) But seriously, I think it is a great image!

You did a wonderful job on this one. I too like the bridge as a compositional element.

 

David.

I like the composition and the idea of your photo, I would try the shot again without the UV filter on you lens. This may help eliminate the flare.

I really like this photo. I agree a bit more of the yellow building on the right would have improved the shot.

I really like the lines and the lighting and the mood and the... Hell, it's just a great photo!

I prefer the original. I like the open beach in front of the subject. Gives a sense of direction. I'm not sure if direction is the right word to describe what I'm feeling but suffice to say I like the space in the original.

David.

I think this is a great photo. I was really drawn to it.

I think this is spectacular. Nice job!

Looks as though the little boy just got done riding the dog. (The dog looks beat!)

Seems a bit underexposed. Just kidding, I've seen the real print so I know it's your scanner. Great shot. :)

David.

I like how you were able to isolate your subject from the preceived chaos around him. It almost seems like he may be lost. Good job.

I love this picture. Too bad the sky isn't a better color. The line of residule left by the water running down the stairs does a nice job of leading my eye in and our of the photo. Great job.

If not for the railing on the right, I might have thought I was looking into a seashell! Great photograph!

That's all I have to say....:)

You've got them my friend! Great shot. Only thing I might do differently is crop off just a bit off the right edge. I really like those night shots.

Love the expression on you son's face. Such concentration! Great shot.

Wow that's a big picture, I'm glad I don't have a 56k modem anymore. I like this one best also (out of the current pictures you have).

Your comments and rating would be much appreciated!!

Thanks!

I think it's fine how it is with the fret board fading to blurriness. I would have preferred a different sheet under it, one without a pattern. Maybe try it again without the edge of the bed in the frame and with a solid background. I wish I could *see* stuff like this to photograph it's very original!!