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david yama

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  1. It's good, but a couple of sky over water photos in your "Mornings and Evenings" folder are much more appealing to me. These colors are so muted, then again, that is the appeal of it too. I'm torn, but I lean towards the more vibrant ones in your portfolio.

     

    David.

  2. Way cool. Looks like she's got white hair, almost. I also like the drip of water coming off her nose, the way it glistens... The limited DOF separates the statue from the background nicely. If I had to nitpick and this is digging, I would say the sky? in the background (whatever that blue is by the top) would be better missing.

     

    David.

  3. I don't know a lot about underwater photography but in this photo, it seems you need to be a bit closer. Also, your flash must be in line with your lens, causing all that backscatter (all that crud floating in the water to light up). So, get a bit closer and move your strobe. Also, have your daughter secure her octopus (alternate air source) to the triangle formed by her mouth and the lower corners of her ribcage. :)

     

    Happy shooting (and diving)

     

    David.

     

    Also, I'm sure you get better photos automatically in exotic places - you better go check some out!!

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    But that is exactly what appeals to me. I like the use of empty black space also. I would try maybe cropping out the blue to the left of her shadow to make it all black see if that works for you.

     

    Happy shooting,

     

    David.

  4. I like the color alot! I also like the leading fence line. I would crop the bottom just a little to move the horizon away from the middle of the photo. Also be sure to watch that horizon during composition to keep it level.

     

    Happy shooting,

     

    David.

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    but please put "nude" in the title in case someone is looking over my shoulder at work! (This way I'll wait until I get home to view!)

     

    But, other than that, I like this photo. Nice use of black space and feels like it has motion.

     

    David.

    sunset

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    I think it's a great shot. I know everyone does sunsets but they are still pleasing to the eye. Your's stands out with the dock and birds adding a great element. Good job!

     

    Happy shooting,

     

    David.

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