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didereaux

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  1. Your horizon line is way off, and you still haven't learned to adj the white balnce for artificial lighting.  You are not progressing Maria, you keep repeating the same mistakes over and over.  I will not wste more time on critiquing your photos.

    Untitled

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    That overly dark  'Superman' kills the shot completely.  The figure IS the subject when combined with the signage.  Definitely worth a re-do, or a post fix.

    IMG_0257

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    Okay, I gather this is available light only.  What I would have done is have the player twist slightly to his left (camera right) so that some of that light that is hitting his hip would illuminate the head and neck of the guitar.

    2014-08-11_00001

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    you said," from behind taken to see the T shirt"

    If that were really the case then why do it wrinkled and at an angle?  And why not crop out the less than flattering head (eyes closed is a no no )?

    Scratch this one, and try again.

    hawk

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    This is a below average shot.  Poor cropping, bad WB.  I realize birds are not easy, I shoot a lot of bird shots so I am not being nasty here, just trying to set you on a different thought-approach when you do birds.   A lot is post work, but a lot can still be done in those short time frames the birds give you.  Keep at it, the fact that you seen this bird and got a clean shot is an accomplishment in itself.

  2. Although some might nit-pick about focus, I will not.  I am more than aware of the difficulty of getting this kind of shot, especially one this good!  Print it and hang it on the wall, you have a keeper!  ;)

    moonset

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    The stand-ins did their job.  I have often wondered why moon shot fanciers rarely take those setting shots.  I suppose they are night owls and sound asleep just before dawn.  ;)

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