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esau_b.

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  1. Very funny. I like the concept. My only suggestion would have been to remove the little twig in the center of the photo(just use the stamp tool in PS). Maybe try placing a homo erectus footprint photo(basically an old footprint) next to this so people can get the humor in it. Good eye.

    Stare Down

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    I agree with the above comment and critique. I too would like to see the hair that is missing. Besides that, i like the expression and the composition. Nice job.

    Beauty

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    She's definetly a pretty girl, but unfortunately she is not in focus. Also, i would try cropping the image b/c of the gap in the bushes on the top left. Its like you have her face as one plane, then the bushes with the flowers and then that last part of hte bush is gone, exposing another plane, but only partially. Ive attached a version of the crop. Keep up the good work.

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    Heavenly mountains

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    This is a very nice landscape image. I really like how youve made a "V" with the two mountians. I do notice a slight red tint to the image that can be fixed in PS. Also, the cropping is not ideal in that the "V" shape form the mountains is off center just a little and hence the composition seems a little off. Lastly, i would bump up the saturation just a little to get some more punch to those hills. I've attached a version of my suggestions. I can just smell that clean air already...

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    Untitled

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    I like the composition and the exposure very much. This looks like an old classical painting with the lighting. My only critique would be to clean up the bread crumbs or whatever that is on the bottom right of the image. But its a superb shot regardless!

    chair & light

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    I like this alot. My only suggestion would have been to alow me to see what the person was reading...though you might have done that on purpose? Nice shot.
  2. I like your concept for this very much; America, the land of the free, does seem to be more and more on lock down and inaccesible. Normally a picture of the american flag is in color, but i like your b/w rendition of it here. A picture like this has many layers to it. Well done.

    Upside Down

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    Sometimes life is about luck, no? Right place at the right time (i.e. with your camera). Nicely done. Can we look forward to cartwheels next time? ;o)

    Upside Down

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    I like this very much. Was this planned or random guy doing his thing on the shore? Might have been interesting if he was balancing on the horizon. Great composition.

    the knot

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    Another great compostion. I really like how youve framed the beam from corner to corner. And youve found just enough use of color tomake this unique. Again, nice job.
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