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WOW! Nice photo. Technicaly and aestethically its "on".

Great composition. Well done.

Very interesting. Is it just a single photo?

Graphically, its great. Nice use of the lines. My only grip with it is on the top left hand corner where the gray wall meets the floor. Also, it has a little bit of a red cast to it. Ive attached a version with my suggestion. What do you think? Its a nice shot.

This just proves that Nature is art. Nice shot.

Nice composition. Where is it?

I really like this one alot! The lines of the roads and colors play well with eachother. Nice shot.

Carl,

 

This one is more to the effect of what i was referring to in my last critique of your photo in this series. I agree with the cropping to center the board, in addioton to making the horizon as horizontal as possible. It looks jsut a little off, maybe its just my eye. I have attached a version of a cropped and rotated pic. Great movement on the clouds. Where is it?

I like this very much. There are only few things i would do differently. 1) is to rotate the image slightly ccw. If you look at the lines of the piano, they are not horizonantal with the picture frame. Also, maybe adjust the levels a little bit. Lastly, i would crop just a little bit off the left of the image to frame the piano in the center, IMO a little more pleasing to the eye. I have attached what i am describing. Very well done!

Nice composition. And i like the b/w aspect to it. As much as the moon is a great subject to capture in photographs, i feel that its a bit too far to make any kind of impact to the image. IMO it actually looks like a dust particle or something on your lens. But i really like the angle youve chosen for the shot. Well done.

Very lovely image. I like the eye dark and not lightened, leaves a bit more mystery to the shot. Nice cropping and compositon as well.

I like the idea very much; perspective and colors. One thing i would do different is next time frame one of those baords directly in the center of the frame to lead the eye out. Nice job.

Carlo,

 

Very nice lighting. Another reason for me to come to Italy. IMO if you would have cropped the picture where the rope attaching the boat starts on the photo, it would frame the picture a little better. Also, i would see what saturating the picture just a little does, as well as sharpening it a bit. I have attached a version of my suggestions. But its a great shot! Nice job.

Nice composition.

Nice shot. It is a bit grainy (not sure if thats your intention?) but i would have liked to have seen this sharp. IMO, it would have been little more interesting if you would have placed your subject and the cross at equal distance from the edge of the picture. Well done.

Nice moody shot. I agree with next time catching the shot with no cars. Great job!

I really like the idea of this shot but in my opinion i think you need to place your model in the center of this particualr shot. Also, there is too much wall space on the right and too much ceiling. It retracts from your model, which is the most interesting piece in this picture. I would leave the room on the bottom because your model is "lost in thought" and looking down, i.e. space to think. Was the water bottle on the phone booth planned? I'm not sure what youre tryin gto convey with that?? I would also clone out the aquafina logo, unless of course this is their new advertising shot. With all that being said, i think you have a lovely model and shot. Nice job.

I agree with the fewer people on the bridge comment. But it is balanced very well. Nice job.

Very nice composition!

Nice shot. Great symmetry and i like the mood the clouds produce.