d_gillespie
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Excellent exposure, color saturation, focus. I wonder if a horizontal image might make a different impression? With the wide open space in the background, it seems natural to capture in landscape vs. portrait orientation. Just a thought.
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This is an excellent still life.
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There are many things about this image that I really like. But, since this is a critique forum, I thought I would add a one thought. The centering of the butterfly is a little to simplistic, perhaps other framing or compositions might add to the scene. Shifting left or right, perhaps up or down? Enjoyable shot.
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Small comments, but with such a strong composition I feel they may be helpful. The cheek and chin are a little distracting in their texture, as contrasted with the arms. The lighting could be a little brighter on her face, but that is very subjective. Another small items is the hair on her right shoulder, with everything else so controlled this seems a bit out of place.
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I like the composition, I zoomed in and noticed the boards in the cabin were not horizontal, it makes for a slightly distracting center to this landscape.
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I think the image would benefit from some cropping to eliminate the upper portion, also the horizon seems very tilted adding to the issues. The three birds are the subject but they have to compete with all the other elements.
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The black and white image seemed more personal, I feel I am intruding on this tender moment with the color version.
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Great story shot. The overall impression is muddy, I think more tonal range may help. Sweet idea.
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I bet the shot would be a real winner if the ball was not obscured by the player int he right foreground. Nice capture, ok composition.
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Seascape? Nice composition, but a bit washed out.
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I love the idea of this shot, but the lines really need be completely horizontal. The slight skew is distracting. Really cool.
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Lots of strong elements. I would like to see a bit more tonal depth. It seems a little flat for such a broad and deep image. Too many mid-tones?
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I feel the cold, but I really want that cardinal sharper.
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This iconic shot seems almost staged. The angle of the shadows and the angles of the skull are"too perfect". I am interested in how this would present in landscape as well.
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This is one of those images... Is it the subject or the shooter? Clearly there are lots of good things going on here I just wonder about a few details. The height of the knees, the costume strap, and the left arm being truly horizontal. Small details for sure, enjoyable image.