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asafrye

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    nicely done! the light panel reflection throws me off a little; maybe just my personal preference, but I think seeing the hint of his eyes through the sunglasses might have improved the aestetics; overall the lighting and expression are fantastic!

    Evija.

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    nice photo! i'd love to know how you used the available light here. her face is gently illuminated from the right, but the object on the wall is casting a shadow to the right. which one is daylight?

    witnessing

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    Thanks Todd...I agree. Well, I did what I could with a candid shot. Can you tell he wasn't exactly posing for me? I think I captured his nature well. Those who know him can see that right away.

    Lili

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    nice combination of natural light & beauty; the structure in the background is competing for attention because its brighter than the subject
  1. Thank you so much for your encouraging critique Parvin...yours is my introductory critique to photo.net and I'm pleased that it was a positive one...especially since this is one of my favorite photos...I pulled it out of the frame and scanned it...something was lost with the scan but the essence of the photo is there, and I still like it -- and not just because I'm now married to the woman in the photo : )

    Béné

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    A perfect portrait! Bravo! My only thought is that the light from her face could be balanced differently against the light from her breasts. This might balance the viewers attention more.
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