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    Let's fly

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    They are really good friends. I wanted to show that on this photo. Thank you for taking time to take a look at this photo and write a comment!

  1. IMHO, it's better to have more space in front of her then behind her. Try to include whole breasts in the frame or not include them at all (try to crop the photo on the left and on the bottom ...). Also, try to use reflector to soften shadows on her face.

     

    Exposure is good as well as focus. Pretty model.

    Flower with Ant

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    Nice flower. However, could be better if the flower is not in the center of the frame. Try to crop the photo on the left and on the bottom to move the flower closer to bottom left corner. The flower is nice, but you didn't have luck with the light. It could look much better with a diffuse light from the side (bring reflector with you).

    Chichi...

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    Nice face expression. Lens flare is a distraction. Could be better if the whole right hand finger was in frame. Keep up the good work!

    Untitled

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    I like this photo. Nice idea, nice shooting position. Those powerlines are bit distracting as well as tones on her dress (looks plastic and overprocessed).

    Red.

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    Your model is very pretty and her pose and face expression is kinda interesting. However, the light is too harsh producing strong shadows (arm/wall, nose, hair/eye, bottom lip, ...) and her face skin doesn't look soft. Try to soften the light and use reflector to eliminate those strong shadows. Also, try to move your model away from the wall or any other object too close to her to avoid shadows on the wall.

    Untitled

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    Lovely pose and pretty model. I would like to see either the whole shadow in the frame or without the shadow at all. Since the light are nice and model and pose are interesting, try without shadow. I like the space in font of her.

    Untitled

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    I like this photo very much. Diagonal line leading an eye through the photo to the houses with no distracting objects - great composition. Lovely tone.
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