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    I do like low shooting position, BW conversion and very good timing. This photo has very good composition and exposure and has a strong story. Congrats!

    Poti #1

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    As I can see, you used a single light box. Maybe you should consider using another one (or reflector) from the other side to handle the shadows. I would crop out her right shoulder. Also, maybe you should move away you light box to get softer light and to avoid strong light on the top of her hair. Anyway, pretty model, nice pose, sharp photo! Congrats!

    A Monk - Vietnam

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    Beautiful portrait Massimo! You captured very good moment and interesting face expression. Crop is just as it should be as well as exposure. I would desaturate the background. Keep up the good work!

    Novel Navel

          8
    David, breaking the rules is sometimes a step forward. :) I saw your portfolio before and I must say that you have great photos and very interesting ideas!

    Novel Navel

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    Very nice photo. I like the colors, tone and light. A bit distracting is her left hand. I think you should put the whole hand in the frame or don't put it at all. Anyway, it's very good photo!

    Untitled

          5
    Model is pretty, the light is just as it should be, I like the tone ... I only think that crop is a bit tight on the top and left. You should try making more photos with this model. I like your work!

    Naiomi***

          6
    Pretty model, nice light, nice pose. I like this photo. The only small things distracting are her leg? on the bottom right and tatoo? on her back. Good work!

    Santorini - Oia

          3
    Beautiful place, very good composition, but postprocessing is a bit too hard for my taste. Maybe you should consider posting another version? I would love to see it!
  1. Erik, I think that something like this will be ok (with some more space around). It's almost always better to leave space in front of your subject (it's looking at that direction or moving ...) because that will lead an eye through the photo. Again, you have very good photo, lovely colors and my suggestions are with best intention.

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    Asia

          4
    Pretty model, interesting angle. It's her and the sky, so maybe you should leave some space on the top and on the right to let this photo breathe and also to make story of the photo stronger.
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