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pavle

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    "friendship"

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    They look so happy! Her earrings, top left corner and red and yellow spots in the background are a bit distracting, so I would suggest a tighter crop here. Also, I would adjust levels and contrast and add some sharpening on eyes. Example is above. Also, maybe you should try BW version? Very good photo anyway!

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    still

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    Very good idea. The light is a bit too strong on her face so you loose details. For photo with this kind of message (story) maybe it's better (IMHO) to make it a bit darker with stronger contrast. Also, I would try BW. Keep working on this idea!

    Marmaris

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    Good idea and compostition. I would remove that boat rope from left middle. Also, I would play with shadows/highlights levels (will bring out details from the sky and make it more interesting). Good work anyway!

    Kasia

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    Neil, I agree with you that my crop is not the best solution, but I find her leg too bright and distracting. Maybe more tighter crop? Maybe you have some crop suggestion to Karol?

    Untitled

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    Pretty model, nice pose. I would try with better contrast, sharpening her eyes, making her skin more smooth. Try to play with tighter crop too (remove bottom and right of the photo). Keep up the good work!

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