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Looong Roots. White Sand National Monument, NM.
elie commented on BelaMolnar's gallery image in Landscape
Very nice composition. I really like the way the eye is capture by the root, moves to its shadow and then continues along the line to arrive to the bushes and then the tree. You can almost feel the water/life flowing from one to the other. A bit more texture/contrast on the sand (middleground) and root on the foreground would have made for an even stronger picture as it would have enabled the viewer to appreciate some of the textured nuances captured by the picture.That's a really minor point though - and a matter of personal state - so not a downside at all to this very nice shot ! Good work ! -
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I like the expression and the gesture - makes you wonder what he's thinking about as he smokes. Also like lighting on the left side of the picture. One minor comment is that the light on the right side of the picture (at the shoulder levle) seems darker than the lighting on the left side would suggest, resulting in a somewhat artificial black in an otherwise well balanced picture. Might be worth trying to increasing the exposure a bit on the right hand side and use vignetting instead - might do the trick. Hope that helps. Good shot !
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I like the geometry and texture in this picture. Also enjoy the plain blue square (upper right corner) and the stripes (in the middle at the bottom), both of which provide strong breaks to the otherwise crusty/old textures. I also like the idea of using different colors to highlight the different textures. The colors appear to be too saturated/vibrant though, which makes we wonder if the image can be printed at scale. Might be worth testing more subtle changes in colors/contrast. Hope that helps. Good stuff.
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Hi all, So am not exactly sure how I feel about this pic and would love your honest constructive comments on it: What do you like about this picture? What do you not like? What would you change? What emotions, if any, does the picture create? Let me know your honest thoughts (good and bad). Thanks in advance !
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Exposure Date: 2016:08:21 18:50:22; Make: FUJIFILM; Model: X-T1; ExposureTime: 1/60 s; FNumber: f/4; ISOSpeedRatings: 1600; ExposureProgram: Aperture priority; ExposureBiasValue: 4294967196/100; MeteringMode: Spot; Flash: Flash did not fire, compulsory flash mode; FocalLength: 18 mm; FocalLengthIn35mmFilm: 27 mm; Software: Adobe Photoshop Lightroom 5.6 (Macintosh);
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Picture taken with a old phone under heavy rain.One of the instances where low resolution gives the picture a painting feel (notably on the umbrella, and trees). Also like the solitude of the character going alone to a place unseen by the viewer. Constructive comments welcome. Tell me what you like, what you don't and what could be have done about it to make the image better. Many thanks and hope you enjoy it.
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I like the industrial feel in this picture, from the boat to the beach of concrete on which these persons (or should I say shadows) are enjoying the last days of summer.The escaping line of the peer does a great job at breaking the symmetry. Reminded me of Rene Burri's famous Sao Paolo picture. Nice work.
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Taken in nyc. In many ways, the scene seemed like a modern twist on Michelangelo's finger of creation, with the 'crowd' of nameless hands looking up to the one visible figure, seemingly intent on trying to save them to bring them to the other side, a place unseen to them but where the viewer can spot darkness lurking in the background. A reminder of the madness of crowds? Constructive comments welcome. Hope you enjoy it.
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Shop Window Reflection I - Rome 2009
elie commented on giuseppe_pasquali's gallery image in Fine Art