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AaronFalkenberg

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    African Eyes nr. 1

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    I liked the thumbnail when I saw it in the queue, but there are a couple of things that I think would help this in general. The shadows fall off quite sharply, so we lose a lot of detail in the mask on the left. I like the composition and the arrangement of the masks, but I'm wondering if setting the masks at different depths would create a more direct image by emphasizing and focusing on one of them. My eye tends to simply jump back and forth between the two. I hope you keep trying different compositions and lighting; they are very interesting.

     

    Cheers,

    Aaron

    Winter pattern

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    The thing with these shots is getting the right balance. It's not so even and static, but neither is one side so much heavier than the other. I'd take this one over the straight shot.

    Cutting powder...

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    Neat! I don't have any experience in graphic design, so I don't know what is and is not possible in terms of decoration. I've seen this kind of thing on TV where the vectors grow out of a point of origin, like you have here with the young snowboarder. I think it works better in television because you have a moving subject, the viewer's eye never rests, and the connection with reality is never completely lost. I don't know if it is possible to bring back some of the original scene in some way. Still, at first glance, it caught my eye, and looks good.

     

    Edit: The colors are fine, but for the brightness of the scene and the explosivness of the vectors, the snowboarder needs to be brighter: think fill flash. Here's a quick and dirty example:

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    Elemental #2

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    Thanks for the comments everyone.

     

    Jeff, I have some idea how it will turn out, that's how I base where to start and stop the pan. In this shot you can see how the yellow streaks are mainly in the center of the image. There was this area of canola that hadn't yet faded so I tried to pan equally around it. The fun part is seeing how the sky and horizon will turn out. I never really know what they will look like; there are so many subtle tones and contours across the sky. If I recall, this pan comprises an area of about 170 degress.

     

    Cheers,

    Aaron

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