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pbajzek

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    "Narcissa"

          131
    Personally I find the angel-wing motif to be silly and overused, but you have really managed to make art out of it! This is a beautiful photo, with excellent light, great composition and the wonderful reflection in the water. Very nice work.

    ARIADNE

          5
    There may be a bit too much rock at the bottom of the frame. But the way the rock edge masks the model's body is lovely, and the diagonal line is very strong. Overall a good image. Have you tried it in B&W?

    Untitled

          7
    Very nice photo. I agree that squaring the lines more would make the image stronger, as would a little more light on the figure, but overall the lighting effect and geometry are great.

    shadow

          4
    Nice lighting and an interesting idea. I fond the ring to be very distracting here- it draws my eye away from the nice interaction between the figure and shadow. But I love the shadows on the model's back.

    Fear

          6
    This is a beautiful photograph. The composition, the model's expression, the lighting, contrast and tones are all wonderful. There's little more for me to say. Thank you for sharing.

    Fairy

          4
    I like the hand, and the pose and composition are good. A bit more space above the model's head might be good, as the edge is so tight I feel it's a bit crowded. It seems the image could be a bit sharper, but it's hard to tell how much of that might be due to JPEG compression. Overall, a nice photo.

    nu97

          5
    Man, I think you just gave away your secret! Though I'm a fan of the "disembodied" images, there's something nice about seeing the light source, as you've shown it here. I'm not sure if it isn't a little too square, though; maybe a bit of an angle would integrate the model into the wondowed environment better. Can't beat the nice light, though.

    Alexandra

          14
    Robert, as always your lighting is spectacular- I admire the way you always achieve excellent separation of the model from the background, something I struggle with at times. I think the model's pose here seems a bit less "comfortable" or natural than some of her others, but the gradation from hilight to shadow across her body is awesome.
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