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    More information about "Globe"

    Globe

    in Uncategorized

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    The wreath/crown forms a sort of window, but as it leads to relatively blank space I'm not sure what the window is showing me. THis may be a good thing. Though the question is not answered, at least I think about it. On a technical note, lovely toning and colors, as always.
    More information about "Jessica"

    Jessica

    in Portrait

          4

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    Hi, Robert,

     

    Lovely lighting for her look, and a nice composition, with her glance into the negative space. My only "complaint" if you will is the little strands of frizzy hair around her face- my eye wants to follow her eyes, but I'm led to these bits of hair that sort of distract me and interrupt the story. Conversely, the wisps of hair above her ear do a nice job of fading things into shadow on the right side.

    More information about "Borlotti #1"

    Borlotti #1

    in Nude and Erotic

          6

    Posted

    Very well done. The trail of beans (if that's what they are) makes a nice path through to the destination, and mimics the vertebrae, which is a nice touch. It's humorous, but more than simply a joke.
    More information about "Garlic"

    Garlic

    in Fine Art

          6

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    Thanks very much for your recent detailed critique on one of my photos. I've actually done some macro-garlic photos recently as well, and I think you've found a good specimen- nice surface textures that are well-rendered, and the depth of the individual cloves reads well. The hint of a reflection underneath helps to ground the subject rather than leaving it floating in a void. If anything, I'd almost want to dodge that just a bit to reinforce that piece of information; it may increase the "solidity" or mass of the garlic.
    More information about "Grief"

    Grief

    in Nude and Erotic

          3

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    Lovely light, though I wish there was just a bit more shadow detail- some definition in her hair and the dark part of her face would be nice. I love the hair swirling around the breast and the shadow that wraps around her belly and rib cage.
    More information about "Sleepy Sunset"

    Sleepy Sunset

    in Fine Art

          5

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    I use a Lensbaby for nudes and it's a very fun lens. There's a lot of luck involved (at least using my camera, since Canon hates for people to use manual focus), but when you really nail an image it's a wonderful quality.

     

    Having said that, I love this one, David. Great use of the special effect, and nice smeary colors.

    More information about "nu145"

    nu145

    in Nude and Erotic

          4

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    The dramatic light, the pose, off-center placement and the mottled shadows on the background give this a sort of mysterious narrative quality. The shape of her right leg/hip is particularly nice.
    More information about "nu149"

    nu149

    in Nude and Erotic

          4

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    This is just beautiful, Robert. The skin tones and texture are amazing, and the diagonal mass of the body is a wonderful shape. You should make a trypdich of your previous image, this one, and the belly button- the same basic image, but zooming in closer each time. Regards to your model as well.
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