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    aaahhh... pre Libero days..... that's how it was played.

     

    Well done and thanks for the trip dowm memory lane..._ (From Australia)

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    Hi Martin. First the good points. You have caught the action at the right moment. We can see what is going on and the overall feel and the mood of the photo is obvious.

    Now for the constructive points. The shutter speed used is too slow as is has blured the main figures. The lens you are using is not too good for indoor shots as the max appature is too small. The shutter needs to be about 2 or 3 times faster for this kind of shooting. I have found that for most volleyball you need about 1/300 sec especially with a longer lens.

     

    Hope this helps,

     

    Glen

    Eye

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    I feel having the other person in the shot as they are, adds to the "story" of the photo. I am in favour of keepin the BG as it is.

    Well done

    GD

    In the pits

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    Well at least you got the winners car.

    Chris, not too bad an effort. In my opinion, to try to make the title stand out, I would try and slow the shutter speed right down to get the crew blurred a little whilst the car is stopped. that to me would create the sense of busyness in the pits.

     

    Cheers

     

    Glen

    The Party

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    Hi Katie,

     

    I am definatly NOT wothout sin, so please don't take this as casting stones...

    I do like the idea, however, I think I can offer a few ideas or thoughts on this pic.

    I'm not a big fan of cutting off the dress in such a wide shot, and it seems a shame to loose such a small portion of it.

    The setting and the steps are a good idea, however the background with the fence and the gate are not so good to look at. Another thing, is the positioning of the girls is such that you can't really see the guys in the arrangement. They are kind of straining to be seen.

    The exposure seem very good and the general arrangement is nice too.

    Hopefully you take this as constructive as it is not meant to be negative.

     

    Cheers

     

    Glen

    Jumping Hurdles

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    A nice enough shot, but shooting from a lower viewpoint (if possible) might help to isolate her action a little more. Also, try to reduce the depth of field to retain the focus on the athlete.

     

    Cheers

     

    Glen

    Desire 6

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    Great photo with very nice emotion and feeling. I am a little distracted by the standing models' straight arm. to me it doesn't convey the same desire as the lower model. It is almost a negative feeling that I can't properly explain. It just doesn't look relaxed, like the rest of the picture.

     

    Thanks

     

    Glen.

    **10

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    It is difficult to know what you are trying to capture in this photo. The Arms and the eyes look awkward to me. I like the legs and the pointed toes, however I don't think that the pose does the model justice.

    Thanks

     

    Glen D.

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