oliver_indra

Very well done! Looks like someone going to have pasta with pesto quite soon! Lighting is exellent, framing/composition mtches your sujet!

 

Grees,

Seems to be full moon time!

Yours looks a bit more "natural".

Greetings,

Hi there!

I´d really like to know what you think about this one. Well, we

worked on it a bit in ps as you may have guessed already and I can

hear the screams of all you puritans out there, but: I have enough

unmanipulated stuff in my portfolio to prove that I know how to

simply pull the trigger. At least I hope so. This picture will be

used for a flyer layout maybe. Any constructive inputs are highly

appreciated.

Greetings,

Do you have a second identity on photo.net or was this comment not referring to mine?

 

This could be abuse, my dear!

Nestor is right about the background, a plain color could have been better than that wall. Nice lighting this time, the slight high-key does wonders on her skin. Again, classic expression, nice for a portrait, cropping is maybe a bit tight.

Grees,

Jeez, we looked boring at 16, wearing that crappy 80´s stuff!

Great girl, amazingly beautiful, I guess she´s going to do it. Hope she will not get spoiled by the sometimes extremely ugly business. About the pic: the angle is clear and logic, lighting is not spectacular but well done, her pose and expression are classic (and I like it). Some highlights on her hair could do wonders, I guess...

Grees,

Really, it´s a bit too dark, but I guess you can handle that and get a better print. For me, the girl in the foreground is a bit too centered, taking away drama. Girl in the back is of course ok, but I think you should have separated them more clearly. The poses are very classic, looking like typical layout for a (conservative) fashion catalogue. As I said already, overall composition suffers a bit from main sujet being exactly in the middle.

 

Otherwise nice picture!

Greetings,

I like it a lot. But I guess I would like it even more with all of her legs visible. Very nice use of light and contrast.

Grees,

Thank you very much for your thoughtful rating on one of my pics! You are right: I am shit. And with your clever comment you helped me to find out what I am doing that wrong. Especially after seeing your great, outstanding pics I am totally convinced: a master is speaking! So pleeze come back to visit my portfolio soon, maybe I can learn even more from you!

Greetings and all the best!

We have a category for "fine art", journalism, PETS, nature, street and even architecture on photo.net. But we do not have one for nudes and erotic. I see the point behind it, the pn-crew wants to avoid a situation where porn-freaks are harvesting the site searching for you-know-what. On the other side we could avoid the same old boring discussion that bursts out every time someone does not hide vaginas or penises with an adaequate amount of shadow. This pic is clearly not porn or sexual harrassment or whatever, it may be art, even if I can see a part of her clitoris. Ask photo.net to create a restricted area for erotic content and maybe we could solve that problem.

 

BTW, very nice pic, but everything´s said already!

Greetings,

you just go out, meet someone on the street, ask her to pose and shoot a pic like that: you´re a master! Wonderful picture, tonality and light is all you can ask for a "snapshot". Checked your portfolio, liked it a lot. Hope to see more of you!

Grees,

Her pose is ok, I just don´t like the angle and the cropping too much. Still, good use of light.

Greetings,

I guess this one could be my favorite but it´s really just a guess because the only thing I can see is a small figure of a girl between something looking like chairs! Really like to see more of you...

You should be proud on your pics but instead of it you seem to hide them! Post bigger! Put a visible copyright info into them if you are afraid of violators!

You got a wonderful portfolio there but what a shame! Why you post them so small they are hard to view even? Copyright stuff? So it´s better to leave it completely!

I like this one especially. Nice pose, quite dynamic, ggod use of light.

I´d really like to see them bigger...

Wonderful mood in this pic, totally no motion blur for a 20 sec pic. Very nice and erotic capture!

Congrats,

She´s by far my favorite! Very nice composition with the horizontal lines in the background (sea).

Good use of ambient light, or am I wrong?

Grees,

Almost perfect, I wouldn´t have cropped his right elbow.

Interesting portrait.

Very good DOF! Looks like the guy is hungry...

Grees,

Nice stillife, good lighting!

Nice picture, I just do not see any reason for your framing. You cut off his shoes...

Greetings,

Very nice pic, good choice of tonality and colors. Just one thing: I wouldn´t have cropped it that tight to her right leg and left hand.

Grees,

Very stylish, DOF is chosen well.

I´d like this one more with some better contrasts.