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J.W. Wall

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    out of the box

          10
    Great, fun capture - well seen! You might consider cropping the top down to just above the top of the near skate. The blue area, angle and ceiling are distracting, to my eyes. Nice work!

    Untitled

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    I think it is a really nice shot, just crop out the bland sand in foreground and background, so it will emphasize the starfish and their colors. Keep posting!

    Untitled

          2
    Well, since you asked, she appears to be squinting into the sun. Her eyes are completely in shadow and hard to see, and the shadows are harsh.

    Retired Puppy

          2

    Re-Tired Puppy -- a 12-year-old Shetland Sheepdog gal. Still plays a

    lot, sleeps a lot -- probably not a bad way to enjoy life!

     

    As to the photo -- would a tighter composition improve it (crop)?

    Thanks for looking.

    November

          18
    Wonderful capture. Maybe just a bit too wide on the left, though, for the eye to concentrate more on the people. Thanks for sharing a fun image.
  1. I really enjoy this image and the green color. Perhaps crop out the left 20 percent or so, which is so dark, so the eye concentrates on all that lushness and the interesting shapes and textures? Anyway, congratulations, well seen.

    Untitled

          10
    Nice image. My eye wants to go to the lightest part -- the blank sky -- which detracts from the model. I almost have to squint to dim the bright background and look into the very deep shadow. Agree about fill.

    ZE 564

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    I share Jack's difficulty in finding that entire story in the image, though perhaps as part of a series. However, my view is that it is an excellent image, tastefully presented. You are one of the best at what you do, Mr. Peri, so one might inquire why you would care what at least some others say about your work? There are brutish folks in places high, low and indifferent. Your concern about the model's sensibilities is laudable and understandable. I'd guess that the choice to post the images on the Internet basically waives at least any technical issues of privacy, however much I might prefer that not to be the case. In any event, your beautiful and sensitive work is much appreciated by this observer. I hope you will continue give us the opportunity to appreciate it.

    Athens Cafe

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    This would work better if there were nothing behind the table -- the background is distracting indeed. Some fill lighting in front would help next time. Keep shooting!
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