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russelljthomas

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    Ban Dong Phong.

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    Nice shot.  The only improvements I could suggest would be to trim the bottom of the photo a little to remove some of the water that doesn't contain the reflection, and maybe darken the sky a little (apply grad filter in light room for example)

  1. Nice shot - the only thing I can suggest to improve it would be to move slightly closer to the light, so the light is in the foreground, not middle ground, and remove the darker section in the foreground by moving and shooting closer to the light - I think this would help add depth the image.

    Fiction!

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    I really like this - great use of wide angle, and well lit in difficult circumstances - I can't contribute any suggestions for improvement, well done.

  2. Nice shot - I like the setting.  The only improvement I can suggest is that the way the three subjects are positioned is a little off putting.  They are not evenly arranged, and the young boy's head is partially obscuring the grandmother.  I think it would be stronger to have them set in the triangle you have tried but to make the arrangement of the triangle a little bit neater.

    Windows

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    This is a nice shot - the only thing I can contribute is that is that it feels a little like you've shot on a very slight angle - ie not straight on, which has meant that some of the verticals are close to vertical, but not quite, which is a little off putting.  You could correct this with the lens correction tool in light room, or if possible shoot from slightly closure to front on.

    Untitled

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    Good shot - the only thing I can contribute is that I find the watch distracting, I think it would be a better photo without the watch.

    A Nice Rock

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    Not a bad photo, but for me it feels like everything is a bit far away, not sure if its possible but maybe if you could get a bit closer to the rock and shoot wide angle is would bring the subject to the fore.  Also, a more dramatic sky may help.

  3. This is fantastic - I love the use of lines and the depth of field in this shot, there is so much to look at and yet it doesn't feel cluttered.  Great work, it is the kind of shot I'd love to produce myself!

  4. I like this - the main thing I can contribute as critique is that it may be better shot on about 45 degree angle rather than straight on and consider a crop so that the bird is not centred

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