russelljthomas

Great Shot - lovely DOF and her gaze off into the distance adds interest, what has her attention?  6/7.

An comments gratefully received - don't need to be positive as long as it is

constructive

All comments gratefully received - don't need to be positive, but please be

constructive

Please let me know what you think - don't need to be positive, but

please be constructive...

Great shot - simple contrast of lack against sky blues very effective and the uncluttered composition tells a nice story.

Nice shot - possibly need to have your model turn a little more - this angle doesn't really define her waist,otherwise lovely shot

Lovely portrait - only improvement I could suggest is that the edge of the vignette is a little sharp and draws attention to the vignette, i think if you soften the edge of the vignette it would help focus on the eye on your subject

I like this composition, it may add a little more drama if you were to pull the exposure down a stop or two.

Nice e composition, I like it.  Te only improvement I can see would be That the image looks a little under exposed (probably due to all the white in the image) may be worth playing wit the exposure in post processing.

Nice shot

Keen for feedback - doesn't need to be positive, but please be

constructive. Thanks.

Keen for some feedback - doesn't need to be positive, but please be

constructive.

Wonderful shot.  The model is beautifully lit, and her pose creates some lovely lines in this image.  Your choice of wardrobe leaves enough to the imagination to help with the classy feel of this low key image.  The only aspect I could suggest as an improvement is that her left hand (on her head) is fully lit, I think if you could darken her hand a bit it would help keep the focus on her face.  Having said that, it is a lovely shot, well done!