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Love this phot as well as the rest in this folder. Can't wait to take Photos as good as yours. I really like how you had 2 diffrent posses with the ripple in the middle. I would coment on the other photo's but you know they are good so I won't.
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I would have to agree with kevin. Very nice work just need a few things done. Kevin told me about the 6' rule before and it does seem to work better. I would have not thought of checking her hair before I shot the photo either but I will on my next shoot. On thing I might say is if your shooting skinny models like this one you can get away with this pose if the model has a few extra pounds in the mid section use other poses. Looking good thanks for sharing!
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I would have to say I like the photo alot. But The hands like others have said should be diffrent. Your Right hand has a ring on it and also looks to have alot of preasure on it. Maybe like your leaning your weight on it. You might try this shot agian with your hand closer to the rest of the white in the picture. I do disagree with Julio the black is good and your cleavage is nice not to revealing but there. Without it it would be alot more black! You might check out Amy Powers here on photo net. She has some nice self portraits. I would have to warn you they are more revieling then yours.
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Thanks for the coments. I learnd the hard way that noon is a bad time to shoot! The model is my wife and she is helping me get better before I take pictures of others. Thanks Jill for looking at my other pictures. I took them all in the same day The male was helping us and I just could not resest taking some of him. I am going to take more of bolth people and maybe I will get some good ones.
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I am trying! The next time I am going to try morning or evening the light is to harsh at this time of day. The model is my wife and is trying to help me get better before I take pictures of other people. She thinks next time she should wear bib coverals with no top just the coveralls with a rail road cap. Oh And cosmo. I think tying her up might work good to but what should she wear? :) Oh and Christopher she is getting tanner.
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Thanks for the help! I think Kevin is right it is bad light. I will try to reshoot this in better light with all your helpfull hints. Any thoughts on film to use for these kinds of photos? I was using kodak gold 200. I just got about 12 rolls of 400 max.
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Thanks for the comments! I have been posting some portriat work latly and got bad reviews so I thought I would post this and maybe feel a little better. To answer your Question about getting over to the right it is as far as I can get I wish I could get over more but there is a sheer drop off with trees and rocks. I will go back and try to shoot on a tripod what film should I use for longer exposer? i bought some kodak 400 max will that work?
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Tried to take this shot when I first got my new camera. Went back and
took it agian this year to see if I could inprove it. How does it
look?
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Had a firend with me helping on a shoot wanted to see what others
thought about it.
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I've been taking pictures of the same model in all locations. Am I on
the right track? Check out my folder if you want. thanks!
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Wondering what people thought? What could I do better?
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Amy have looked at all your overexposed shots hope you don't mind. I like them all but I think I like this one best because I can see expresion on the face. Almost like the model is lostin her own world. It was hard to chose witch one to pick but I geuss I would say this one for know. I also like the other one I commented on. You do very nic e work hope I can learn from your photos and get better myself. Thanks for sharing!
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Thanks for the comments I will keep trying!
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Thanks for the comments. I am working on everything so someday I can turn in a good shot.
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Like the pose like the model. The whole photo is good but that hand that is blury that everyone else has already commented on it.
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I must start to say that I only wish I was half as good as you! I like this shot. It is not your best but it is also not your worst. I see alot of detail in the hair I can also see the nuckels on the hand, tendons, muscle, etc. It looks like a good one to me. I would agree with another post that the back ground/what the model is sitting on would be better if it where all one color. Besides that very nice. Thanks for sharing!
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Just another portrait to see if I can get some help. I have it in B&W
to.
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Just trying to see what I need to do to get better. This is my first
indoor portrait shot so please be nice but helpfull.
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Looks like your in the columbia goerge. Must be Multnoma falls? -
If you didn't over expose it would it have been to dark? Just a question. I like it but have mixed feelings of what else you could have done Did you try diffrant exp. and angles ?
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