Waterfall 2nd try 2001

Tried to take this shot when I first got my new camera. Went back and

took it agian this year to see if I could inprove it. How does it

look?

A couple of suggestions from a rank amateur: (a) composition - I might move the waterfall further off-center, closer to one of the "thirds", or try a vertical frame; (b) a longer exposure (tripod mounted) to create that lovely ethereal look to the water flow.

 

Mark

It appears that there is another waterfall and pool above the one in the center of the frame. It'd be kinda cool to see a shot with a double pool, double fall.

 

BTW love the shot.

 

Regards

 

Sergio

Thanks for the comments! I have been posting some portriat work latly and got bad reviews so I thought I would post this and maybe feel a little better. To answer your Question about getting over to the right it is as far as I can get I wish I could get over more but there is a sheer drop off with trees and rocks. I will go back and try to shoot on a tripod what film should I use for longer exposer? i bought some kodak 400 max will that work?

for longer exposure, use lower ASA. As you used 200 now, go for 100 and maybe add some filters (neutral grey for example).