mark jones

please just rate, critique and comment

shot this photo, first roll out of the camera had cheap material for

back ground. just wondering how to label this shot hi key or abstract

or just a good photo?

At it agian! I can't get the scan very good on any of my photo's But

I am trying! Please give me input on this photo so I can improve.

I would say I like deborgh 3 and 6 better. There is more light and I can see the model better. It just seems she has more expresion and you took it at a better angle. The shadow across her from the log/her arm is a bit destracting but I do like the look of the photo. Did you take it in the middle of the day? To me it gives the feeling of beeing alone in the middel of no where but with a fun relaxing feeling. Not to get off the subject but I have been in the market for a new camera and woundered how you like the nikon f100? Thanks for sharing!

The print has very good detail thought I would post it to see what

everyone thought?

reposted to try to get more input on this photo. Would like comments

and ratings to try to get better!

What do you think? Am I doing any better?

thought this waas a good pic. What dou you think?

Thank you very much for your comments especialy yours Mr. Greenspun. I do Have one without flash. I thought the flash got rid off shadows around the eyes and brighten's up the face. What do you think?

congrates on pow Amy! I always said I liked this photo as well as the rest of your work. Looks like you finally get your week in the spot light form photo net. The recagnition you deserve. Hope to see somemore of your work!

Had this in my portfolio and got a rating on it with out posting it

so I figure lets see what everyone else thinks!

Just one more thought to watch for next time. I think the hair should be a little less wind blown. But who am I to judge! Nice shot.

My favorite photo in this folder! Very good work

very good photo i like that I can see her skin so well. Lighting is great. Your hole folder is very good I like the first one the best in the satin sheets I would have commented on all your photos but they are all so good so I just did this one. Great work!

what do you think is she having fun yet

Just looked at you candels folder. You have some real nice photos in it. Looks to me like your doing more then playing with photography. Keep it up.

Well for just playing around you got a good shot! I do have to say that the shadow is a distaction and maybe even the glass. I would also say I love the lighting and the look that the model has. Very nice eyes and expresion. Keep playing and let us see somemore!

Very nice photo the only thing I can say I don't like is the facial expresion. That is just a matter of taste thow.

I would like your ideas and opinions on this shot. Please leave

comments/sujestions.

Yes this is a bad scan but I am not very good with computers. the origanal looks better. Trust me!

I posted this a little bit ago and go no comments on it. I would like

some so if you would please tell me how to improve. Thanks!

Very good! I keep coming back and looking at this picture trying to figure out what the last poster was talking about. I think the lighting is very good. I am drawn right to her face and eyes witch is the subject of the photo. I think you did everything right. Thanks for sharing your photo.

Looking like a very good subject I like the old rail lines. I think you could do better on this thow with diffrent angeles or light. try somemore shots of this place. It is a good spot!

Have had this in my portfolio but did not post it. Thought I might

see what you think.

Like the light in the eyes it really gets your attintion. The back ground is kind of busy like said in another post but it looks good over all. I also thought what if you left all her hair and head in the photo it might be better but you might not have been able to do that. Keep up the good work thanks for sharing.