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portrait before a night out
 

portrait before a night out


mark jones
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shot at sunset with 35-80mm lens from above her.

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This kind of perspective is often interesting. In this particular image I think it would have been better to pull down the power on the fill-flash. The lighting looks a bit unnatural.
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Fill flash is a little bright. Was it off camera? Anyway, you should be proud to have greenspun comment on your photo.
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Thank you very much for your comments especialy yours Mr. Greenspun. I do Have one without flash. I thought the flash got rid off shadows around the eyes and brighten's up the face. What do you think?

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the fill flash is a bit overblown. Have her unlock her left knee - overall she's a bit self conscious. I hate the background, but I like the angle/perspective. the title is "before a night out" so I imagine your mind saw beauty and wanted to document it- which is what comes across. Unfortunately, the snapshot style doesn't add to the subject, but rather detracts. I'd like to see you spend a few hours with her dressed up and considering how to translate the outfit/attitude into an image with impact that focuses the impulse you felt to press the shutter. Keep shooting.
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