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Cologne Cathedral, Hohenzollern Bridge
wolfgangarnold commented on FranzWeber's gallery image in Cityscape
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You're asking for comments about the composition - so, here's my view: The photo is about textures and colours: the rough and withered dead wood contrasts and thus emphasizes the fresh and young leaves. The lines of the wood form very pleasant, wavy lines which lead the eyes towards the green leaves and almost circle the them - great until here. Now, comes from my point of view the only drawback: the leaves are pushed pretty much to the right edge of the frame, which (for me) breaks the overall very harmonic composition. The situation may not have allowed it, but I'd have tried to place the leaves roughly at 2/3 (somewhere near the golden) of the frame. As a trick (you can argue whether it's a cheap one ;-)) you might try to play with a vignette and a careful dodging / brightening the leaves - the light is soft, which usually supports such postprocessing steps very well, i.e. unless you strongly overdo it, it should not jeopardize the natural and realistic appearance (which I consider a big plus in this photo).
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@Holger: many thanks for giving my photo of attention - indeed, it's not supposed to be an eye catcher for a quick glance, therefore, I'm glad it caught and kept your attention for a while! @Vincent: some of the questions that I try to build into my photos are: what do we see and percieve? And what escapes our gaze and perception (and therefore our 'reality'). What attracted me here was the tension between uneven, curvy natural structers and plain man made structures. I was lucky that it was a windy day with clouds coming and going, so I could chose a moment where the shadows very still a bit vague.
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A SIGNAL, A HANDLE... FOR THE THRESHOLD
wolfgangarnold commented on DGorinstein's gallery image in Architecture
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Diorama - Smoker, (early 21st century)
wolfgangarnold commented on Jack McRitchie's gallery image in Street
Jack, many thanks for your reply - I feel truly honoured. I can imagine,that this photo may not attract many viewers from a quick glance at its thumbnail because it does not immediately reveal it's secrets - the viewer has to take a little effort to understand what's going on between all the "actors" but is rewarded with a story that goes far beyond the mere sum of the visual elements. -
You've waited for the right light - I love how the side light models every detail of the facade - like telling its long history and rhe warm light emphasizes the colour very pleasantly. The photo reminds me of one of my favourite vacations spend in the south of France (where I couldn't get enough of this light).
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Diorama - Smoker, (early 21st century)
wolfgangarnold commented on Jack McRitchie's gallery image in Street
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